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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-02-07 08:40 AM


I Guess


I feel the tracing of my heart
'tween laughter and the tears
each start of every morn,
in length of day and years.

I circle in the shadows,
a searching still unclear.
No mercy do I place on self
as longings keep me here.

The frozen winds of frozen words,
the silence wallowed in.
Moment's truth creating hold
of common thoughts again.

I path myself unevenness,
tripping over numb.
A kiss is just a kiss, I guess
to something I succumb.

It plays my lips in notes of warmth,
tuned to dance the dreams,
those that rest in lips of yours
that curve to meet my seems.

And seams that need the sewing
where threadworn by the rain
and soaking of the fears of "not"
that overflow my brain.

I guess I am no different then
those aged in passions past.
Someday I hope to overcome
and hold a kiss to last.

M

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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-02-07 12:09 PM


A very good poem! Grover.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2004-02-07 12:32 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, in that sense you are no different as He has a plan for all and love is what keeps hearts young, sweet friend, may its gift forever bless your heart, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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3 posted 2004-02-07 12:46 PM


I like this. Its very sweet.

:-)

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-03-30 04:42 AM



Goldenrose
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5 posted 2004-03-30 05:05 AM


Well written....words of truth...thank you M..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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