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MGROVES
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I see a smile
that's covering a frown.
Looking for love,
become their clown.

My heart is heavy,
it's being crushed by pain.
Trying to do whats right,
made out to be insane.

Punishing me,
for what he lacks.
Gives me a smile,
as the knife enters my back.

He can do and say,
as he pleases.
Tormentation and hate,
that never ceases.

When I react, defend,
or try to stop his game.
He placs blame on me,
doubling the pain.

That is not love,
but hate.
His heart is locked,
behind Hell's Gate.

© Copyright 2004 marsha groves~adragonsdream~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-07-2004 04:41 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Oh! Really impressive!

Either you'll succeed in rescuing him, or you just escape .....

Don't burn your wings, my dear!

Love, Margherita
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(big angel hugs) Keep praying for him, sweet friend, try to stay away if he hurts your heart deep inside but wish him salvation in hope he too can change and free himself fromn the chains, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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oh this is painful...please break free...while you can still feel

it is possible! I've done it twice!
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4 posted 02-21-2004 05:46 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

i thank you so much for your reading, i should say feeling what i am saying. i thank you all so much

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Yes, get away as fast as you can! Grover.
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You need an angel from heaven....I will pray for one to be sent your way....to help break those chains and give you the key...

unlock that gatw..and be set free...

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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7 posted 02-22-2004 07:11 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

run fast and don't look back

I had to read this again and put it back up to the top
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8 posted 04-15-2004 09:52 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

thankyou for you encouragement and support your replies give me strength

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this is good. listen to what they said. because my way doesn't work.

lost and afraid i am calling out to you light angel.

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