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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-02-07 01:58 AM




I see a smile
that's covering a frown.
Looking for love,
become their clown.

My heart is heavy,
it's being crushed by pain.
Trying to do whats right,
made out to be insane.

Punishing me,
for what he lacks.
Gives me a smile,
as the knife enters my back.

He can do and say,
as he pleases.
Tormentation and hate,
that never ceases.

When I react, defend,
or try to stop his game.
He placs blame on me,
doubling the pain.

That is not love,
but hate.
His heart is locked,
behind Hell's Gate.


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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-02-07 04:41 AM


Oh! Really impressive!

Either you'll succeed in rescuing him, or you just escape .....

Don't burn your wings, my dear!

Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-02-07 01:47 PM




(big angel hugs) Keep praying for him, sweet friend, try to stay away if he hurts your heart deep inside but wish him salvation in hope he too can change and free himself fromn the chains, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-07 01:56 PM


oh this is painful...please break free...while you can still feel

it is possible! I've done it twice!

MGROVES
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4 posted 2004-02-21 05:46 PM


i thank you so much for your reading, i should say feeling what i am saying. i thank you all so much


Grover
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5 posted 2004-02-22 10:56 AM


Yes, get away as fast as you can! Grover.
A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2004-02-22 11:05 AM


You need an angel from heaven....I will pray for one to be sent your way....to help break those chains and give you the key...

unlock that gatw..and be set free...

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-02-22 07:11 PM


run fast and don't look back

I had to read this again and put it back up to the top

MGROVES
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8 posted 2004-04-15 09:52 PM


thankyou for you encouragement and support your replies give me strength


spritrider87
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9 posted 2004-08-27 10:56 AM


this is good. listen to what they said. because my way doesn't work.

lost and afraid i am calling out to you light angel.

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