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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2004-02-07 01:55 AM



~*~

I wish for you
someone to touch your heart
someone to climb a mountain with
someone to break your fall
and your reasons for taking risks.

I wish for you
someone who wants you on their side
in spite of your lack of skill
someone to bounce the ball back
and bend a couple rules.

I wish for you
someone to dry your tears
and lend a shoulder you can lean to
someone who'll build a fire inside
and keep the smoke out of your eyes.

I wish for you
someone to race against your heart
and let you be the winner
someone to dance with you all night
and sweep you off your feet.

I wish for you
someone to light the candle wick
someone to pour you wine
and fill your glass
until you glow.

I wish for you
that special someone
who will come for you when you need them too
someone to tuck the blankets in
and dream a little dream of you.

I wish for you
someone to make your memories with
and give you reason to remember
I wish for you
someone to touch your heart

~And so much more~

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

(revised after deleting the whole darn thang)

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Richy
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1 posted 2004-02-07 02:17 AM




Wow Blusey, how did you know what all my wishes were?

Especially... “someone who wants you on their side in spite of your lack of skill“... lol

That’s got to be the main one for sure...

Seriously, these are all such wonderful things to wish for anybody...

I would be happy with any one of them...

I wish for you all of these things too,
and whatever else your sweet heart desires

Thanks Bluesy  

This was the best!

And so are you!




Margherita
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2 posted 2004-02-07 04:25 AM


Dear Lori, you touched the whole spectrum of our hearts' desires in such a beautiful tender way ...
Do these magnificent beings exist?
Probably, if we are willing to do the same, we might call forth this perfection.
Your heart overflows and your pen refers truthfully and beautifully.
Love and hugs. Margherita

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-07 04:34 AM


I will take this for myself and hug you
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4 posted 2004-02-07 10:20 AM


I'm glad you brought it back...because you just gave me a pretty complete readout of things I have been wishing...and not for myself.

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nn
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5 posted 2004-02-07 10:33 AM




Grover
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6 posted 2004-02-07 11:08 AM


Glad to read your revision. I don't recall reading the original, but this is very good! Grover.
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2004-02-07 01:15 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, thank you so much for wishing me and everyone happiness, you are an angelic friend to us all, yay, and I wish you the greatest happiness always too, yay! (does happy joy for everyone dance) I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Duncan
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8 posted 2004-02-07 05:17 PM


Geez...that's a bunch of good stuff you're wishin' Bluesy.  Throw in a lifetime supply of coffee ya think?????  
vandana
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9 posted 2004-02-07 05:57 PM


enjoyed

jwesley
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10 posted 2004-02-07 06:21 PM


Wonderful . . . and may the same stars always put twinkles in your eyes, my friend.

jwesley

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Gaia
11 posted 2004-02-07 06:27 PM


a keeper for my files, Bluseygal

Richy
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12 posted 2004-02-08 05:10 PM



....... BUUuuMMmmp!.....

Oopps!  Oh, sorry Bluesy!

Was that you?


Clumsy me...

Well... you know what?  I'm glad I
bumped into this poem anyway...

Too many people didn't get a chance
to read it...

And now this way, they can

I hope you're enjoying the weekend!
                  

                        

            
                

Enchantress
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13 posted 2004-02-08 06:40 PM


Excellent write Bluesy!
I'm glad Richy popped it back up...
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

muted
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14 posted 2004-02-08 06:51 PM


all that sweetness in your heart...all those wishes (i hope you saved some for yourself)..
..heres to making wishes come true!!


BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
15 posted 2004-02-08 07:04 PM


I truly do wish these things for everyone, including myself.

In a perfect world of course.
Thanks to all of you for reading, and for leaving your nice replies.

suthern
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16 posted 2004-02-09 10:18 AM


How very lovely... yes... all this and more. *S*
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