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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-02-07 01:09 AM



"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-02-07 01:11 AM


Terrific, Snow!
Richy
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2 posted 2004-02-07 01:23 AM




I’ve only got one too.
Can you skate fast on one skate?

If so... I’ll meet you somewhere, in the middle...





Snow
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3 posted 2004-02-07 01:44 AM


iliana... thank you!

richy, i'm not looking for speed... :-)
the middle is a very good place.
(thanks so much for laughing earlier!!)
~hugs, ::still blushing:: snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Richy
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4 posted 2004-02-07 01:59 AM




It’s just that there’s something about hot coals,
and thin ice, that for some reason make me put a
little yip in my giddy up...

Just in case though... you’d better bring a long rope...


    


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5 posted 2004-02-07 02:43 AM


Oh wow! This is a fantastic piece Snow. I just love it. You just made my night and I think I will draw inspiration from this and create something myself from this idea. If you are lucky I'll post it Monday for all to see. (Snicker!)

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
6 posted 2004-02-07 02:53 AM


richy, my long rope is always handy.. *smile*
kevin, i am really looking forward to
see what you post... so make sure you
do or i'll bug ya until i see it.. lol


thank you both so much for the
smiles tonight !!

snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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7 posted 2004-02-07 01:31 PM




(smiles) Just get some water-skis in your imagination and hang-glide over the slippery when wet conditions, yay! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, your writing and presentations are so poignant, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Snow, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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8 posted 2004-02-07 01:33 PM


ooooooohhhhgawd! This is AWESOME!
Enchantress
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9 posted 2004-02-07 01:42 PM


May I just say WOW!!!!!
Excellent...so much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
10 posted 2004-02-07 03:40 PM


noah, passing shadows and enchantress, thank you all very very much!!


snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Suetang
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11 posted 2004-02-07 03:48 PM


Absolutely beautiful!  The picture and word combination was perfect and the images seen through your words were amazing.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

KoKo
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12 posted 2004-02-07 04:25 PM


Awesome
jwesley
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13 posted 2004-02-07 07:17 PM


Yep .. as KoKo said ... AWESOME!!

jwesley

Youngatheart
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14 posted 2004-02-07 07:19 PM


I love how you presented this...gorgeous!

[This message has been edited by Youngatheart (02-08-2004 08:57 AM).]

Sadelite
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15 posted 2004-02-07 07:24 PM


I loved your play on images and words!  Very creative!
                 Sadelite

steavenr
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16 posted 2004-02-07 10:41 PM


well done...you have woven a masterpiece of eloquence, wit, and fantasy...you have created a jewel
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