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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-02-06 11:25 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

I lose all sense of direction
Whenever I'm not with you
I seem to be at quite a loss
Not knowing what to do

Everything loses its color
Whenever you're not there
The flowers lose their fragrance
My life seems to be so bare

The sun forgets to shine
And the birds no longer sing
There is sadness in my heart
No joy does this day bring

The stars lose their lustre
The sky is no longer blue
Inside me it is raining
As my heart pines for you

The clouds have no silver lining
The sand is cold beneath my feet
But things will return to normal
When you and I next meet

* * *

"In our life
there is a single color,
as on an artist's palette
which provides the meaning
of life and art.
It is the color of love"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-06 11:41 PM




(smiles) Yay! Love makes anything possible, sweet friend, God Bless You, may true love always blanket your heart and be the sun that follows you in the day and the moon at night, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-02-07 12:38 PM


Oh, Sue, your poems are so soft and romantic.  This one made me sad for I can sense how much you miss him.  That's good writing in my book.  
Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

3 posted 2004-02-07 12:55 PM



Sue, your poetry has always been wonderful,
but like some fine cognac sittng in a cellar,
it is just getting smoother, and sweeter,
as the days go by...

I really enjoyed this!




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