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Magnus
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0 posted 2004-02-06 07:34 PM


An evil sickness took grasp
and tore from you a precious life.
A life once filled with happiness,
laughter and smiles.

A face of freshness, of youth, of
spring rains that gently fall upon
a mother earth...beautiful, the
child born of God....

A life so young and trusting, now
fallen..Taken from the arms of
those who love, those who now
grieve of their loss.

Rest dear child, for Heaven shall
hold you.  Angels shall guide you
from pain to eternal happiness.
And evil shall feel the wrath of
Hell’s pit...

Eternal rest shall keep you,
though your soul shall run ever
wild and free amongst the
heavens....

God bless you Carlie.

If you enjoy reading a poem about children.....
go to this link...  It was one of my first
poems...
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[This message has been edited by Magnus (02-06-2004 08:39 PM).]

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-02-06 07:46 PM


Oh Barry this is heartwrenching. What pain.
Yes, may Carlie soar with the Angels.
Love, Margherita

ice
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2 posted 2004-02-06 08:02 PM


Magnus...
The whole world is at a loss... grasping for reasons, I come up with no answers...
only tears...
Your poem was needed, it has helped dry them...thank you
_______ice
  ><>

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3 posted 2004-02-06 08:11 PM


Margherita,  Ice....

This tragedy has haunted me since the moment
it first was aired.  I have a daughter who
is almost 11.  A beautiful little darling.
One who I would never recover from if someone
took her from me,  and took her life as
senselessly as Carlie's life was taken.  

I felt I needed to say something...I just
could not sit here and keep it inside.  It
has touched me very deeply and I am numb.

I hugged my little darling this morning,  
yesterday...the day before...I won't stop.
She will always know she is loved.  God
please allow her,  and all the children to
grow and experience the joys of life,  not
the fears and pain...

Thank You...

Martie
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4 posted 2004-02-06 08:12 PM


Barry

One little girl can become anyone's little girl, so quickly.  

Richy
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5 posted 2004-02-06 09:02 PM



As a parent, the ultimate concern is for
the safety and well being of our children.
And, the ultimate fear, is the possibility of
one of them getting hurt, or passing on,
before their time.

It would be, and is, such a tragic loss enough,
if and when a child were to leave us due to an
accident or an illness. But for a child like little
Carlie, who was taken away from everything
she ever knew, and ever will. By someone so
evil to be able to do something like that.
Is a nightmare, that simply can never end...

It’s an awful feeling, knowing that there are
human beings on this earth, capable of doing
something this dreadfully horrific...

And it’s really sad knowing that this kind
of evil happens, all the time, and all over
the world.

And, you just can’t help but throw your hands
up in the air, and yell what in the world
is going on?

It is without a doubt, the saddest of days, for
little Carlie’s family, and for all of her friends.

It is also, and should be, such a sad day,
for all humanity as well


God Bless You Little Carlie
And, bless you too Magnus...

iliana
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6 posted 2004-02-06 09:05 PM


Thank you, Barry, for saying this for all of us.  
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7 posted 2004-02-06 09:24 PM


...

Thank you Barry.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2004-02-06 09:29 PM


Barry, what happened to this child is a tragedy beyond words. I cannot imagine the grief and sorrow her parents and friends are having to endure.

Thank you for saying what so many of us are feeling.

Hugs to all parents and children.
Marti

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9 posted 2004-02-06 09:30 PM


P.S.  I think you should send your poem to her parents. They would probably be thrilled to have it!

Marti

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10 posted 2004-02-06 09:40 PM


OhMagnus~
I've cried over what happened to this darling little girl and her family~

Sometimes ... it seems that no matter how much we love them, how precious they are to us ... that evil monsters lurk just beyond their innocence~

This is a loving piece dear sir ... I have a card ready to mail tomorrow to Carlie's parents and have written a little something for them also ..... I know they would be pleased to read this piece of loving thought in memory of Carlie~

*Huglets* sweet gentleman~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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11 posted 2004-02-06 09:51 PM


thank you for writing what i've been thinking of today, hold her in our hearts with words like these, another horrible crime that makes no sense
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12 posted 2004-02-07 12:57 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Barry, my heart goes out to Carlie's family as this is a tragedy that should never have happened and should NEVER happen to any child! (sad sigh) Your golden heart shines with the utmost deepest love and compassion, sweet friend, and shame on all those people who neglect and steal and rape ones innocence and integrity and beauty of a child, I hope they get what they deserve for this crime, God Bless You and Carlie and her loved ones forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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13 posted 2004-02-07 04:46 AM


mine are 12 and 16...I could not imagine that pain

thank you for this piece

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14 posted 2004-02-07 06:16 PM


Barry~
To let you know ... my son and daughter-in-law came by today and picked up the packet to give to Carlie's parents ... my poem and yours and the card I chose for them will be hand-delivered to them.

I know they will find comfort in knowing that precious little Carlie was held in loving thought of so many~

Thank you, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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15 posted 2004-02-07 07:18 PM


I feel empathy for Carlie and those who love her.

I feel sadness, fury, and pity for those who take and waste the beauty around us.

Thank you, Magnus, for penning our care.

                 ~Sadelite
                    

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