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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2004-02-06 07:25 PM


I sit in total quite
And listen to the noises
Of the outside world

It is like the crickets
Are singing
To me from their hearts

It is a melody
That I can not stop
Listening to

A melody that brings peace
And slowly makes me
Drift off to sleep


Cold hands means a warm heart

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-02-06 07:34 PM


Lovely calming write here Julie...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2004-02-06 08:42 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully melodious, sweet friend, God Bless You, I always love listening to their symphonies in the summer, God Bless You, I could use their harmony now, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ThunderMage
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3 posted 2004-02-06 09:55 PM


So many things can soothe the body, mind, and spirit, healing I could definitely use. Wish I had some crickets around here.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-02-06 09:59 PM


These sounds are so familiar to me although I haven't heard them in years.  Those crickets harping away outside my window, and hearing the bullfrogs croaking in the distance.  Thanks for the lovely memory!
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