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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-02-06 06:47 PM



Appearing in the drizzle of a rainy winter night
Shuddering the empty chill as rivers fill by right
The newness justly open-hearted quivers moonlight spill
And shines a pleasant gold upon a moment open still

Our hands seek refuge pausing in the ease of half lit feel
Wandering uncharted passage streams a dreams reveal
Closer than I’ve ever stood my heart to hear so clear
And you bring dawn to daring morn each pulse my own to hear

Here leaning near in wonder, mouthed in open breaths so low
Waiting to be certain parted curtain leaves the last to know
The vision of your smile as it tingles all along my spine
Breathing only in the blanket of your warmth upon each inch of mine

As never the surrender in your eyes comprise my fate
Trading lingered look and longing quench as lips elate
This driven of the rivers that flow rampant in my soul
Unpredicted and delighted in these dreams so urgent toll

And forever seems remanded in conclusions destined be
As I hold you and adore you in the full content of me

Copyright Kkh 2/6/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
vandana
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1 posted 2004-02-06 06:49 PM


enjoyed this
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2 posted 2004-02-06 06:55 PM


very very nice!
Margherita
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3 posted 2004-02-06 07:00 PM


So intense, tender and peaceful.
Wonderfully written.
Love, Margherita

iliana
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4 posted 2004-02-06 07:07 PM


TD -- oh, so lovely.....sigh......jo
SmartChick
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5 posted 2004-02-06 07:13 PM


This is beautiful.

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6 posted 2004-02-06 08:55 PM


You are your own inspiration,  and you do
inspire...many times over....nicely done K.

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7 posted 2004-02-07 12:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, always sleep easy on the Cloud Nine of your dreams guided by loves true joy, God Bless You, that is the perfect Sleep Number bed, 777, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Richy
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8 posted 2004-02-07 01:38 AM




Wow TD, this is so good, that some of lines alone can stand
as mini poems. I think I could read this 100 times and still find
something new each time.

Absolutely Amazing TD!

What a pearl!




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