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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-02-06 06:36 PM



YOURS FOREVER
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/3/01

     

Let me be yours forever
There's nothing as magical as you
No matter how gray the weather
Your smile always makes my skies blue

I want to be yours forever
You are the one I've been looking for my whole life
When you are with me, I can never feel happier
The way your lips sing, the way your eyes shine

I can be yours forever,
I just want to mnake you the happiest lover you can be
I think of you all the time, you are my dream lover
You are my personal heaven, both in and out of my dreams

I'll be yours forever, please take me
Listen to my heart sing for you
I need you, I know magic exists when you are beside me
Let me be yours forever, love, I love you!



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
vandana
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1 posted 2004-02-06 06:41 PM


liked it a lot
NewEnglandlazurlu
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2 posted 2004-02-06 07:26 PM


Hi Noah, I love your candy heart poems and I love the following lines:

I need you, I know magic exists when you are beside me
Let me be yours forever, love, I love you!


Huggles to you my friend, Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.


the_loner_23
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3 posted 2004-02-06 07:27 PM


This is so sweet.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Margherita
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4 posted 2004-02-06 07:30 PM


A most tender song of your heart, dear Noah.
Love, Margherita

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5 posted 2004-02-06 07:32 PM


Wonderful Valentine post straight from your sweet heart Noah.
Big hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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