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IF - A Repost
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IF - A Repost |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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IF If I ever leave you in this world all by your self I want for you to read this poem I kept high on a shelf If I can never touch your face or hear your lovely voice I hope you live a life that’s filled, with happiness and joy I tried so hard to find the words to show you how I feel I tried to write this simple poem that somehow would reveal How much I always cared for you in everything you did I wish I told you more of all the feelings that I hid I’m sorry for the times I ever caused you to be stressed With all the love I felt from you I know that I was blessed I hope you know the problems that we had were all my own I’m sorry living with me made you feel so all alone I want for you to know that when you call me I’ll be there It doesn’t matter if your really happy or your scared Just know that I am holding you whenever you have fear And that I’ll always be there every time you cry a tear I wish that I could bottle up your laughter in a vial I’d pour it out into the wind and make the whole world smile I wish that I could find the color trapped within your eyes I’d toss it up into the air and paint a whole new sky I wish that I could capture your illuminating glow The effervescence of your smile could lift those feeling low I wish that I could find the tune you hear when angels fly I’d sing it nightly, in your ear until you softly cried If god forbid the world should end in one big global crime Our spirit’s still, would hold each other till the end of time And even if the windows to our souls both fell apart The love we have, would still unlock the doors to each our hearts So when you see a butterfly or smell a pretty rose? It’s just me getting close to you so I can kiss your nose I tried to find some special words to show you how I feel I tried to write this simple poem that somehow would reveal How truly I adore and worship everything you do If I could only find the words I’d give them all to you [This message has been edited by Richy (02-06-2004 10:47 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Richy -- this was so full of love. It was simply wonderful! .......jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richy...there is nothing shameless about this beautiful love poem...nothing! I'm glad you reposted it! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh....richy..how beautiful! im glad you reposted this so late comers like me can see it! all that love looks like its going to burst your little heart.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I wish that I could bottle up your laughter in a vial I’d pour it out into the wind and make the whole world smile" WOW!!! Just ... WOW!! ~Smiles, Hugs and yes, a tear, Nancy~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful it made me cry, sweet friend, God Bless You, your golden heart shines of true love that would be faithful even in the most troubling of times, but as far as I'm concerned, it will never be IF, it will be WILL, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I'm glad you reposted it too....Now all the rest of us guys are gonna have to work harder, eh? Thanx Richy.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Richy these are very beautiful reflections of love. Love, Margherita  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love is never, ever shameless Richy dear. it's called rapture! Just beautiful, this~ |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh my... anyone would love to hear these words. Such feeling, such love in them. This really is amazing. I can tell you mean what you say Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I think one of the best ways to know someone is not by what they post, and certainly not by their replies....but by what they choose to repost, and why. I'm glad I stopped to read this one. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Richy, I hope and pray that she saw this and that she loved it just as much as all of us women here do. It's really special for a man to be able to express his love in such a beautiful way. You have a very loving heart, Richy. Thank you for being you. Hugs, Ethel |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Iliana ~ Hi Jo, thanks for taking the time to stop by, have a nice weekend. Martie ~ Thanks so much Martie. Your the sweetest! Dawn ~ Yes Dawn, that’s just how it feels at times. Thank You Dawn. I’m glad you’re here with us. Nancy ~ Oh Nancy... you are just too wonderful! Noah ~ Noah, I wonder if you realize how much happiness you bring to so many, and how much everyone care’s for you. I guess what I mean to say is that you have so much love going out all the time, I just hope that you are able to let a little in now and then... You have a great weekend my friend I initially named this post: “IF - A repost, because I’m shameless“ And what I meant was, that I was just sorta jokin that I was shameless, for reposting a poem. Not that I felt in any way shameless about the poem. Any who, I scratched off, the last part. I’m sorry for any confusion on my part... R |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Magnus ~ Magnus, the day anyone will have to do that, will be the day, the earth stops spinning... lol Thanks for saying something like that though. You are a gentleman’s gentleman. Margherita ~ Hiya Margherita! Thanks so much for saying that. I appreciate it a lot! Bluesy ~ Hi Bluesy! Did you mean to say that, there is never, ever anything shameful about love? I know what you meant It was my title’s fault, it made things a little confusing. You’re right about feeling enraptured. That sums up love in a most wonderful way. Thank You Blusey! Allyssa ~ How you doing Allyssa? It’s so nice to hear from you. I hope all is well, and thanks so much for the nice comments. Ed ~ Well I’m glad you did too Ed. It being close to Valentines Day, I thought I’d go ahead and give this one another go round. Thanks for the comments Ed. I think you’re a great poet, and a fine human being. Ethel ~ Ethel, you really made me smile when I read what you wrote. Usually people tell me, they’d really appreciate it if I could just not act so much like.... uh well... myself... lol Thank You Ethel. I don’t think you realize how much your words meant to me. |
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