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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2004-02-06 03:10 PM



And, And, And

why is it
I chase after
the tail of wind
and bite off more
than I can chew
and continue to chew
long after the flavor
has ceased to be
and
have more questions
than there ever
were answers
and can not
comprehend
the answers
that I have

"our scars have the power to remind us that the past was real" Hannibal Lecter

© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-02-06 03:20 PM


OneSlick~
Ummmmmmmmmmmm, cause you're a woman and we don't have to explain nuttin'~
Love ya' gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Grover
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2 posted 2004-02-06 03:26 PM


Right to the point... a good write! Grover.
iliana
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3 posted 2004-02-06 03:26 PM


If you figure that one out, let me know, okay!  Liked this very much!
Krawdad
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4 posted 2004-02-06 03:35 PM


Now I know why I have a headache today . . . it's you, running around inside my head!
As if the vertigo wasn't enough?



love your work,h!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2004-02-06 03:53 PM


cause that's the way they want it to be...

hypothetical they

*s
M

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6 posted 2004-02-06 04:08 PM


Are we related? *G*

Excellent write! *S*

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-02-07 04:30 AM


sigh

always seems that way, huh?

Richy
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8 posted 2004-02-07 04:43 AM




It's almost magical when someone writes
something that you can so relate with...

This is me too...

Always has been

And... probably always will
Thank you so much for this

Just knowing someone else feels
the same way you do...

Can really go a long way...


Kicking Kim
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9 posted 2004-02-07 06:18 AM


It seems this way for all of us.  Inevitably there need to be more questions than answers in the world, because a world full of explanation would be boring!!  Ouch my head hurts!!

^*~Just smile...it confuses people~*^

Great poem

^*~Kim~*^  

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10 posted 2004-02-07 01:38 PM




(smiles) I know...I know! (raises hand patiently) Cause you're a gentle poetess of many words whose questions reveal answers within the colors of your heart and imnagination? (big angel hugs) Yay, this is a most heartfelt write, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

David2
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11 posted 2004-02-07 01:48 PM


This is truly thought proving without being pretentious! I loved the flow of words and the easy meter. Good work.
                David

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