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Waking to another World
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Waking to another World |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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The snow holds no cold The darkness no longer haunting The fire so much less a temptation I bath in the fall of water I wash with words of your heart Seeing through the light of a happier life Wrapping my body in a cloak of your protection I leave the water knowing you are with me and have cleansed me As snow begins to fall I raise my face to greet the cycle of life as it melts on my cheek Knowing if winter can feel this good spring just may make me weep with the joy and gratitude of knowing you _______________________________________ ~Special thanks to that heap of metal, the USS Canopus, and my orders to it, another lifetime ago. Because that is where fate started it's journey.~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Knowing if winter can feel this good spring just may make me weep with the joy and gratitude of knowing you" Wonderful write here Susan... Much enjoyed this morning. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Special thanks to that heap of metal made me smile... It's wonderful for fate to step in, isn't it. hugs M |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I liked this Susie.....and I awake to a different world everyday...without reading the news!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, this was an amazing poem. I really liked it. ........jo |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonderful |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
at first I thought this would be sad but the ending was perfect! I thought to myself that you could not be talking about Florida...but then I remembered the two times we had snow, though it wasn't really enough to even have a good snowball fight *grin* |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Knowing if winter can feel this good spring just may make me weep with the joy and gratitude of knowing you " oh, i love to see people weeping with joy.. a very lovely feeling from this poem.. thank you  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Susan - great write, may the spring bring you the joys of change... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A beautiful concept lovingly expressed. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and it certainly was a heap of metal...and depending upon where it was heaped....one could be inspired to either scream or jump for joy.... I remember her well.... Thanx Susan, a very good write you have here. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is a beautiful poem and it made me smile - not easy to do on this cranky day! Thanks. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you everyone!  All of you are too nice to me!"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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