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Rag-doll.
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Rag-doll. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Suspended by wires, your little puppet. Your little rag-doll. Move me as you wish, walk and run, rain upon me. It has grown cold, create me the snow, and let me die. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
It’s such a drag, being manipulated, to be sure. Well Kaoru, Here’s to freedom of coercion, the liberty of restraint, and the pursuit of happiness... with no strings attached... You’re on a roll Kaoru But then, you were probably born on one... Thanks for the great reads tonight!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd!  such pain, such beauty |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yet another wonderful writing...  "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Count me as one who enjoyed this. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Imagery -- you provoke pictures with your words! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o the snowpeople that come and go on a whim of heart bump to this |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
excellent. no more words than necessary. I don't think I am familiar with your work, but I will certainly be watching for ti form now on. A pleasure stumbling onto here. Collen |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Don't die, just stand by your convictions and say NO. Don't trade who you are for anything less cause that's what is causing more pain inside, then the person doing this to you. But a great write...as always, brillant, and poetic, no matter what the thoughts... |
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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
No - you're no victim of the ebb and flow -- noticing and allowing you are changed and tired for the wanting Cheers...how else would we know?? machiner |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Awesome piece |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Meg, you and your writing are awesome!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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