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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-02-05 11:54 PM


    

GIVE ME A HUG
(Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/7/01

    

Give me a hug
Shine me a smile
Show me your love
Let's talk a while

Give me a hug
How sweet it can be
To be loved
And all join in harmony

    

Give me a hug
Hold me when I need it the most
When I'm down, help me find my place in the sun
Make me transparent when I feel like a ghost

Give me a hug, I'll also give you one
All we need is a little respect
And a little love
To fill this world with harmony again

    

    



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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1 posted 2004-02-06 09:38 AM


I know, Noah, sometimes all it would take is that one nice hug.  Sending you one :-)
~K~

vandana
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2 posted 2004-02-06 09:52 AM


here's my hug too liked this
Bonnie j
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3 posted 2004-02-06 09:56 AM


Here comes a hug from Ohio
Love Bon-Bon

allamericanjoe
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4 posted 2004-02-06 12:56 PM


a hug can say more than volumes of words, you have combined the two wonderfully and I feel hugged   hugs in return!! Beautiful poem, warm and loving.

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time"  ~James taylor~

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2004-02-06 12:59 PM


Here's a hug from way up in Canada, my friend.

Oh heck ... here's another one for good measure!

I enjoyed this Noah ... thanks for the smile (and the hug).

Best wishes,
/Kit

Margherita
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6 posted 2004-02-06 06:38 PM


Tender and warm, dear Noah.

Here comes my hug for you ...

Love and Joy. Margherita

the_loner_23
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7 posted 2004-02-06 07:29 PM


I loved this one. Dern it!!!!!!!! I wish Liam could write stuff like this for me.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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