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Open Poetry #31

just one more chance

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

0 posted 2004-02-05 08:36 PM

As I light the candle,
for an intiment dinner for two.
My hand trembles,
as my thoughts are only of you.

As I tell him,
to come and see.
I realize,
this isn't who I want it to be.

As I look across the table,
in the dim candle light.
My eyes see a face,
my heart cries "this isn't right"

Soft music, candles,
dinner for two.
A romantic evening,
now my body aches for you.

I try to show him,
how much I care.
As my hand touches his body,
I realize I am not being fair.

A song breaks the silence,
brings a tear.
My heart fills with love,
no more room for fear.

I got up,
and walked away.
My love won't be denied,
another day.

Tonight my life,
will finally start.
Free to say "I love you",
with all my heart.

There was a time,
you wanted me.
A time we knew,
our love couldn't be.

Was it real,
or just words, wispered in the night.
To forget the days,
as our bodies joined with such delight.

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2004-02-05 08:42 PM

striking...pays on my guilt strings too. truly, we can't feign affection for long. great sequencing and transition within your lines and stanzas. well done!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-02-05 09:17 PM

(big angel hugs) Unrequited love is truly toxic, sweet friend, love should always deserve to be expessed and declared to the world, God Bless You, I send healing angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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