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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-02-05 08:08 PM



impudence is simply stewed
audacity that demands
release atop pressure’s peak
then slides in demise


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celestecat
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1 posted 2004-02-05 08:11 PM


short and sweet. i liked it.
Grover
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2 posted 2004-02-05 08:11 PM


Compact and descriptive with rhythm. Grover.
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3 posted 2004-02-05 09:23 PM




(big angel hugs) You speak of your emotions in most poignant and honest detail, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is marvelous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steaven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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