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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-02-05 07:40 PM




While looking through the glass,
I catch the relection of a face.
Coldly staring at me,
in this God forsaken place.

I've seen,
that face before.
Yet different,
before they locked the door.

No freedom,
to come or go.
Nor touch another,
as emotions flow.

Like the tide,
returning to the sea.
Along with it,
a smile that use to be.

Eyes that use to,
sparkle and shine.
Empty holes of darkness,
fill the reflection across mine.

I wonder how it could be,
what have I done.
For that reflection and me,
to become one.

Now I recognize,
what use to be.
For the reflection
coldly staring back,
                    Is me.



© Copyright 2004 marsha groves~adragonsdream~ - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-02-05 07:48 PM


A good poem! Grover.
Amara
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2 posted 2004-02-05 08:14 PM


While looking through the glass,
I catch the relection of a face.
Coldly staring at me,
in this God forsaken place.


That struck me, for whatever reason...very nice.

Light keep you always,
Amara

May light keep you, faith guide you, and love and laughter always find you.

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3 posted 2004-02-05 09:20 PM




(big angel hugs) It is amazing how we see our own reflection but sometimes it doesn't seem familiar at all, God Bless You, this is most heartfelt and surreal, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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