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vandana
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0 posted 2004-02-05 07:21 PM



Swept in , a new star rises
Sisterhood and good surprises

A new star rises
With good surprises

Wept and known , as fortunes soul is shown
one hand out, one hand clasped, the wider sighs unknown

Sitting in the context of new skies
As fortunes soul is shown

Seeing in the wonder of new eyes
The splendor of connection to revitalize

A right hand is unknown
With few of hopes of stars

Yet right to right,a friendship sewn
Tacking sparkles on the velvet sphere of Mars

And good few miles
to the new skies

Seen side by side
Of tomorrow's

Dual enterprise

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1 posted 2004-02-05 07:28 PM


Very well done you two!
you duet extremely well together...
Please ...one more time!?
~Hugs to you both~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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2 posted 2004-02-05 07:38 PM


Both of you ladies did well with this...

Nice blend,  well done!!

Martie
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3 posted 2004-02-05 07:44 PM


A wonderful blend of poetry.  Much enjoyed!
Grover
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4 posted 2004-02-05 07:50 PM


Very nice. Grover.
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5 posted 2004-02-05 09:24 PM


lovely lovely!!
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6 posted 2004-02-05 09:30 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I really love this gorgeous duet, sweet friends, you took us all on such a cosmic journey in this free-wheeling fantasy! (big angel hugs) God Bless You Both, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Vandana and Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Kaoru
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7 posted 2004-02-06 12:01 PM


PHEW! *wipes brow*
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8 posted 2004-02-06 04:37 AM


excellent! nice duet!
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9 posted 2004-02-06 04:55 PM


Very nice...James
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10 posted 2004-02-06 09:03 PM


Vandana:
Thank you so much for the opportunity to write with you.  I enjoyed the journey.
Thank you all for your kind replies.
TD

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11 posted 2004-02-06 10:25 PM


Wonderful waltzing you two~
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