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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-02-11 10:37 PM



Exasperating infuriating

Please you start agin
Give me a moment to get my pen

She just glared
(Temporarily verbally impaired)

I looked her way
And asked “What did I say?”

spun on heels and walked

“I don’t think I enjoyed this talk”
(said to the back of her head
as she exited the room)

Gloom


© Copyright 2004 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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1 posted 2004-02-11 10:48 PM


(I orginally had a message here, but edited it, somehow or other putting it in the next box!  Didn't want to leave this blank, so ....  When will I ever become computer literate/?/???/
Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-02-11 10:52 PM


Interesting format...it's creatively different.
   Take care.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-02-11 11:30 PM


Can't blame you -- no one wants to talk to the back of a head!  Enjoyed by me.........jo
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-02-12 03:35 AM


I see


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