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Some Midnight
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Some Midnight |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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In the pearl of the sky I went looking for the light barefoot around the rows of windows Some hand had spilled ice-cubes there They were melting into the lemon hidden in the corner of outside Wake with me some midnight and we will search for morning in delicious slumbering warmth covered with this light |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love this. You bring back such wonderful earthy smells of early early... and my childhood reblooms in my mind... Thank you, Martie!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I wouldn't mind looking around with you. LOL |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
In the pearl of the sky I went looking for the light barefoot around the rows of windows Some hand had spilled ice-cubes there They were melting into the lemon hidden in the corner of outside Wake with me some midnight and we will search for morning in delicious slumbering warmth covered with this light Martie, I was going to quote the parts that stood out to me, and look what I ended up with!! Wow, I love this!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
This reminds me of a favorite childhood memory... love this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely...thank you for this calming piece Martie. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Martie...."we will wait beneath the pines in luxurous grass of wonder, seeking him" ...thanks for the nice poem...Enjoyed. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wake with me some midnight and we will search for morning in delicious slumbering warmth covered with this light How incredibly lovely. *S* How could anyone refuse? *S* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very sweet lovely write gal... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Oh, oh ... how this whispers the beauty of the midnight call~ As lovely as they come dear poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Some hand had spilled ice-cubes there They were melting into the lemon hidden in the corner of outside" The words, the images and the invitation redefined warmth, especially on an endless winter's day on the other coast. Very cool write Martie...  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this reminds me so much of how I see the moon, sweet friend, yay, it's a Lemon Zinger Lemonhead is what I used to tell my mom! (giggles) This is so gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wake with me some midnight and we will search for morning in delicious slumbering warmth covered with this light ========================= I'll bet there is flannel involved.  There is a pleasure in the pathless woods. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Janet Marie....forever in flannel...unless its summertime. You know me too well!  Thanks all for walking the night moon with me. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Makes me think of tiptoeing through the Tulips!! Sheesh, am I ever off on a wild goose chase... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Martie, Your writing causes my mind to wander, always bringing it back to a calming... You really have a knack, Lady! ~Sadelite |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You've inspired me, Martie. I'm going to take that walk right now. Different night, different street, different town.....same walk. You can be in the same place and time on a walk, but it isn't always necessary. I'll let you know if that ice has melted yet. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Martie, you have an innocent zeal for life that is just so wonderfully refreshing A wondrous gift, I bet you’ve always had And one I’m sure, you always will |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well - This puts insomnia into a new light.. I think I'll go to sleep so I can wake up and go on a quest...  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - I love those walks and your poem takes me to several I have had - as usual you write so amazingly - loved it - Paul |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow -- you are so creative, Martie! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
im just going to ditto everyone else! really nice |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - as always... BC |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Back for a moment -- I said I'd let you know if the ice had melted... it had. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In the pearl of the sky I went looking for the light barefoot That's a nice way to begin... and if we are lucky enough, it will be just like that. Your writing is such an assortment, and a very special gift. Hugs Martie girl~ and Thank you~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Wake with me some midnight and we will search for morning in delicious slumbering warmth covered with this light" Best offer I've had in years. Thank you for sharing the beauty of your thoughts. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How lovely are your thoughts. Soft, romantic, perfect Your words are you Love Liz |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
"Wake with me some midnight and we will search for morning" =========================== hey Martie.....I had to tell you that these lines just jumped out at me.....awesome write! sp  ...a chill that bends; this I swear--you're the fiercest calm I've been in... |
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