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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Composition Bodies dissolve, divest to grime Spirits evolve and crest in time And in this steep of living tea Lays the souls of all we see. Weaves that have a slipknot hold To form the pattern of the mold A portion of a cosmic dust Collected in eternals thrust. And in the story, prime to grime Lies the history of our time All essential to the wend A touch of bend where seems no end. But end is but a symbols quote An endless song an endless note The gleaming of a changing theme The deeming of a wink of seem. It is a view an open door Perhaps a view of evermore [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-05-2004 10:41 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful...how so lovely are your words, concept and melody...stunnning write! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"But end is but a symbols quote An endless song an endless note The gleaming of a changing theme The deeming of a wink of seem. It is a view an open door Perhaps a view of evermore" Beautiful morning write m'friend. I very much enjoy waking up and reading you every day. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoyed your "view" this morning Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A touch of bend where seems no end. I like that thought ...a never ending bend... s M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You take the literal.. and weave surreal.. thank you, Sy!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, Seymour... It reminds me of those portions of my life I'd love to throw away... only to realize they're part of who I am... perhaps the reason for where I am... the entirety of the mix is important. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
take a bow...you've done well |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you my dear. suthern Yes it is.  Sunshine Maureen, Glag you liked. scorpio, Enjoyed your comment. Nancy, You are a delight. LeeJ You are sweet. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"It is a view an open door Perhaps a view of evermore" Reminded me of someone...thanks Sy.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Poe maybe? Thanks for the read dunc. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "But end is but a symbols quote An endless song an endless note The gleaming of a changing theme The deeming of a wink of seem." A wink and a hug to you for this lovely poem.   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you love. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Yes, that is one heck of a view Much enjoyed Thanks for always making me Sey mour  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LOL Thank you Richy. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Bodies dissolve, divest to grime Spirits evolve and crest in time And in this steep of living tea Lays the souls of all we see. Weaves that have a slipknot hold To from the pattern of the mold A portion of a cosmic dust Collected in eternals thrust. And in the story, prime to grime Lies the history of our time All essential to the wend A touch of bend where seems no end. But end is but a symbols quote An endless song an endless note The gleaming of a changing theme The deeming of a wink of seem. ============== When I read your couplets of way cool... all I can do is smile at you. As verses of rhyme they define cadence and wisdom...but each couplet stands on their own merit and serves proof you are our pied piper poetic prophet.  Spirits evolve and crest in time A portion of a cosmic dust Collected in eternals thrust and youre just too cool for school.   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, That's my Tinkerbell. Your comments sooth the savage soul. Cant tell you how much I enjoy your replies. WWRS |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you vandana. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) It is sooooooo beautiful how love can add a verse to the grand composition of life, sweet friend, universally speaking your heart is, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mayhaps a typo? Line 6, word 2....from or form? Otherwise....your usual witty and well formed piece of reflection... as always.... Mag. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. Barry, Thank you my friend never noticed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But end is but a symbols quote An endless song an endless note The gleaming of a changing theme The deeming of a wink of seem. It is a view an open door Perhaps a view of evermore Seymour, I love your views, my friend. Keep showing them to us. Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Hugs back my dear and thank you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Perhaps it is. Liked this a lot, Seymour! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Perhaps... Always good to read you dear sir! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
GG Thank you so much for the read. |
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