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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-02-04 11:55 PM


    

IN THE MOOD
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/15/02

Sweetheart, I'm in the mood
Just you, me, and the music
Come, this special night is custom-made for two
Your summer song swoops in like a blitzkrieg

Your sunny smile, stained in pomegranate
And when you bellow from the oceans of your lungs, oh, the eurythmy
I become far-sighted, to your light of day I'm blinded
And I'm faithfully yours, you the gracious ballerina, me your mezzazine

    

In your language everything sounds provencal
I always wake up and smell more than just coffee
Your water lotus perfume having my instincts dancing in circles
I can't understand your vernacular yet every word you speak sounds so lovely

Sweetheart, I'm in the mood
Let us love like there's no tomorrow
You are God's B-side, you are soul food
You are my savannah sparrow...

    

    



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2004-02-05 12:10 PM


I loved it Noah. Your poetry is so beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Fire Fairy
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2 posted 2004-02-05 01:41 AM


Absolutely beautiful Noah. So romantically exquisite. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent.
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3 posted 2004-02-05 02:16 AM



Very sweet and tender as always Noah

A wonderful piece!


  

Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-02-05 09:58 AM


Lovely,,,,
Where DO you find all these lovely pics?
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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5 posted 2004-02-05 10:43 AM


Beautiful Noah!

Eric

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