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dingusjr
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0 posted 2004-02-04 10:24 PM



There is a dog in the woods!
all slobbers and smiles.
Life is complete to simply run
mad circles around each tree.
with unbridled joy.

Never mind being quiet
when there are squirrels
and rabbits to chase,
Leaves to crash through...
Lessons to be taught.

He is back again
all tongue and tail,
like a blind date gone wonderfully mad.
To a dog in the woods
every day is Christmas.


[This message has been edited by dingusjr (02-05-2004 10:17 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-02-04 11:06 PM




(does happy puppy dance) Awwwwwwwww, this is just soooooooo cute, sweet friend, hey boy, fetch! (watches puppy zoom like cheetah on date to catch twig) Hehehe! (giggles delightedly) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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2 posted 2004-02-05 03:20 AM




Dingusjr, you're a riot!

Especially the ending...

You got a great sense of humor

Sounds like you got a good little dog too.


Oh Hey, I inserted the little icon of some kind of road kill, in lieu of old Philly boy... lol

Not that I want any real harm done to him...


Take Care



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3 posted 2004-02-05 09:56 AM


ah,,,,to have a dogs life
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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4 posted 2004-02-05 10:06 AM


Ya make me see him -- exactly the way, knowing they're-up-in-these-trees-and-maybe-every-tree-and-gotta-chase-em-all.....

And these lines

"all tongue and tail,
like a blind date gone wonderfully bad.

          had to laugh, and could almost feel the slobber.... though we might discuss whether that image would describe a bad blind date.....

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dingusjr
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5 posted 2004-02-05 10:10 AM


Ya Rat, changed it to "wonderfully mad".
I think that fits better.

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6 posted 2004-02-05 10:26 AM


This was a delight to read!
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7 posted 2004-02-05 10:28 AM


Larry~
I LOVE IT !!

I know this dog ... I believe him to be my Briard~
His name is Kirby and boy does he love to run the woods ... ~
Great adventure here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2004-02-05 12:59 PM


And when you watch him, he shares Christmas... so you can't help but smile. *S*
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9 posted 2004-02-05 12:59 PM


cute
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