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Standing On My Own
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Standing On My Own |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ You were my one and only Now, I don't know what to do I always feel so lost Since I no longer have you I think about those years When our love was so new The times when they were good And, I was there with you We stuck it out together When things became so tough Standing beside each other Displaying all of our love Now, you are way back there And, I am here alone Even though times are so rough I am making it on my own 2-3-04 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Triumph out of defeat! You go girl.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Good for you! Grover. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A touching write. And positive. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, I am sorry of your heartache you've dealt with but with your uplifting smile you are bound to get far more reward in return, yay, you go girl, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are strong Sue, and you are doing it on your own.  Strong writing. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good for you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
strength and hope! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Yes, you are making it on your own. And Sue, we're all so darn proud of you. I'm sure there are days when it's hard and lonely, but hang in there. The sun will shine on you tomorrow. Hugs and luvs, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sue I felt so much strengh in your words and I could tell that you are a survivor who will go on to bigger and better things. I wish for you much love and happiness. "We are all angels with only one wing.... we can fly only by embracing each other." Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sue...it is just amazing what a little ant can do all alone...like...move a mountain...i KNEW you could do it...h |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Bravo for a wonderful poem. Good luck. [This message has been edited by Youngatheart (02-08-2004 08:59 AM).] |
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