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doing the two-step |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
and p d p ow uuU n and p d uuU ow n plateauplateausplateauplateauplateau plateau Two steps forward One step back, Two steps forward One step back, Two steps forw rd OR WAS IT two steps back one step forward, two steps back one step forward? How does one advance? [This message has been edited by Sadelite (02-05-2004 07:26 AM).] |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
lol, holy cow that is an amusing format wonderful job |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Years ago, a wise friend told me that if you think of life as two steps forward, one step back, two steps forward, one step back...that you'd soon notice that you were always going forward, maybe not as quickly as desired, but forward. This is not an easy concept for me. I literally have to dance this one out sometimes, especially when on an emotional roller coaster. Perhaps, someone out there would care to check out her advice. Her advice was optimistic, (perhaps, a little unlike this poem.) The advice is much better when danced... [This message has been edited by Sadelite (02-04-2004 08:42 PM).] |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Masked Intruder, Yes, I guess the format is a little... It just seems to be the flow right now. Thanks for your response. have a good evening; Sadelite [This message has been edited by Sadelite (02-04-2004 08:38 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) By retracing our footsteps, I never like to think of it as counting them, but simply feeling the kind of ground we've walked, what we treaded softly on or had to climb on rougher pastures, yay! (big angel hugs) That I feel may be the answer, getting to know the topography, God Bless You, this is a wonderful thought, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sadelite, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....very creative in word and design! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite LOL You turn around and walk backwards. Enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SadieLady~ I LIKE IT !!!  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*` ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sadelite....you gotta side step every so often....so you don't ware the carpet. Enjoyed this, and know just what you mean. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Thank you, EVERYONE. I'm crunched for time, trying to write a little everyday. (I'd like to write a special response to each of you because you all gave me smiles and insights, but am unable to right now. I'll stop and see you at your posts as soon as time permits... Take care ~Sadelite |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Interesting, I get it now! |
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