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Your Lovely Smile
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Your Lovely Smile |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Your Lovely Smile What is it in your eyes, that make me see us both together? What is it in your smile, that lets me know? What is it that can make two, separate hearts go on forever? What does it take for love, to always grow? Why does it feel like somehow, we’ve been doing this forever? When days were kinder, to our chance and fate. How many chances do we get to meet in every lifetime? Until we go, and then it is too late? What makes us feel so calm around, someone we hardly know? And why are they forever on our mind? Is there some kind of special pact we carry from the past? Or are these ties meant never to unbind? Why can’t we stop believing, in a dream we try to hide? Will destiny give us a fighting chance? Maybe it is up to fate, and that we simply have One thousand lifetimes, left of our romance? Why am I so in love with how you captivate me so? How come I feel a whisper, in my ear? Why does an answer have to hurt the more we need to know? Your lovely when your holding back a tear I’m glad I finally found you, whether it’s to be or not I’m here and now my love will never go But if it’s true, remember, that your eyes hold all the secrets That your lovely smile, will somehow always show [This message has been edited by Richy (02-05-2004 01:14 AM).] |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Alot of questions about love-- you pose them very well, along with some answers. Grover. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me cry because I get overemotional and sensitive over beautiful love poems; I guess watching all those beautiful Disney animated movies based on fairy tales made me believe in sweet romantic love so much that it is what I dream to have to! (smiles) She is so lucky to have you, someone who is so sensitive and caring to share tears and you underatand them before she tells you, sweet friend, I guess the answer to this question that may have to suffice is perhaps God just spent more time on her to you! (smiles) Yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
captivating read...liked a whole lot |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richy~ Breathlessly beautiful~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The way your eyes would sparkle made me see us both together Your lovely smile, let me know..." Breath-taking write Richy... Love this one! Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Richy! You are forever the romantic......and I love that quality in you. I just loved this! Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
"always on my mind , ties that can never unbind ..... yes I feel that too you expressed those feelings so beautifully Hope |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
ahhh richy timeless questions that have been asked over and over by many a lover.... you've done such a sweet job of presenting them... lovely, indeed. snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your poetry made me smile~ Very lovely~ ~ARH  love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is just beautiful...ive had these thoughts at times...you have really given me a *sigh* today... ah, its nice to see the romance flowing!  Dawn |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Cupids arrow flew true with this lovely write,,,,it goes into my keepers file,,,and to my fiance as well,,,,,,thank you for such lovely words Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But if it’s true, remember, that your eyes hold all the secrets How true this is, Richy. I love this!! Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, for sure that's true....great romantic write there Richy! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Richy....sometimes when we question so much, what we are really unsure of is ourselves. You have a loving heart....and that is a gift for all that know you. Hugs! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
That’s not sometimes for me Martie, it’s all the time... Thank you for seeing that, and for the warm thoughts |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Grover ~ Grover, I really appreciate all of your support. Your a very kind soul Noah ~ Don’t ever stop believing Noah. With a heart like yours, I just know that your future is going to be filled with bliss and content. And thanks for all the nice things you said. Do me a favor Noah... don’t ever leave us. Stevean ~ As always Steaven, thank you. I hope all is going well. Marge ~ Ahhh, a day is just not a day, without one of your huglets Marge. I hope your having a great day. Thank You Nancy ~ Thank for always being there Nancy, you give so much, to so many. Sue ~ You’re the true Romantic Sue. I only write like this, when I’m having a bad day. As always, thank you my friend. Hope ~ Thank You Hope. I really do appreciate all of your wonderful comments. Have a nice day. Snow ~ Thanks so much Snow, that means a lot to me, coming from you. I really enjoy your writing. ARH ~ Hi Romantic Heart, thank you for that. I’m so glad it made you smile. Dawn ~ Is that what I heard Dawn? I thought it was a warm gentle wind, flowing through the meadow... Thank You Dawn. It’s always so nice hearing from you.Michelle ~ So that’s what I felt! LOL Those little things hurt! Thanks so much Michelle. I wish you and your fiance all the best. Ethel ~ Thank You for that Ethel. I hope your having a great day. Dixie ~ Thanks Dixie. It’s always nice to see you here. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What makes us feel so calm around, someone we hardly know? And why are they forever on our mind? I don't know. *S* I do know that when it happens, you want to stay in their skin forever. *S* I like this very much, Richy! *S* |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Why am I so in love with how you captivate me so? How come I feel a whisper, in my ear? Crystal clear! Richy, you dooo pose a lot of questions! Don't worry, you're not alone! (I'm always asking questions! I never seem to have many answers, but that's ok-the questions keep me busy enough!) Reading your lovely thoughts was a nice diversion from sleeping in on this Saturday morning! Enjoyed, ~Sadelite~ |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
What makes us feel so calm around, someone we hardly know? And why are they forever on our mind? because you have known that person all along...in your dreams and in your heart. well done, Riohy. Youngster [This message has been edited by Youngatheart (02-08-2004 09:00 AM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Each of these a question I have asked, and asked again....and the answer to each is, "It doesn't matter. Love now....yes, love." ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am so glad I had a chance to read this one, Richy. It is truly beautiful. |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
I just go "Ahhhhhh" everytime I ready one of your poems. Melted to my seat.... Beautiful! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Suthern ~ Wow Suthern, I liked the way you put that. Thank you for coming by, and for then nice reply Sadelite ~ Thank You Sadelite. Yeah, I’m funny that way... What is that? It’s water. What is this called? Uhh breathing. What’s that? Uhh, the moon. A regular Curious George... lol  Thanks again Sadelite. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Youngster ~ You know what Youngster... I believe that too. Thanks again Young One, I really appreciate your comments... signed: Oldster  Ed ~ You know what Ed, there’s just nothing “Ratish” about you... I like what you said. And you know what? You’re right. Thanks for stopping by Ed |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Kacy ~ Hi Kacy, thanks for taking the time to reply. I really appreciate it. I hope all is well Deb Lynne ~ Ahhh Deb... now you’ve got me doing it... That was just so sweet of you!Thank You, I really appreciate that  |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Hmmmm, Richy...and, just how did you get hold of a copy of my journal...huh? Nice write, bud! Thanks!Love and Light...jc p.s. I have it on "good authority" that it's much longer than just a thousand lifetimes! This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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