Open Poetry #31 |
A Heart Of Gold |
Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
A Heart Of Gold She sat before the mirror Pen and paper in her hand She stared at her reflection Then began to write again Here I see a heart of gold Purest in most forms Peculiar in the oddest shape Big chunks seem to be gone I think it could be melted down Reshaped and formed again Cloaked inside the outer Gold lies deep within So if you shape this heart of gold Please add a daily shine And if you should mistreat it This heart will lose its shape Then before your very eyes With wings, this heart escapes |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed. Grover. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This was very nice Kie I can see it shining all the way from here! Thanks for sharing this |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So if you shape this heart of gold Please add a daily shine And if you should mistreat it This heart will lose its shape Then before your very eyes With wings, this heart escapes Kie, this is so beautiful!! Thanks for sharing it. Hugs Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very lovely, Kie! And how wise that the wings are in place! Just in case! Love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and you have a golden too as it is proven by this most beautiful and compassionate poem, sweet friend, yay! (does happy heart dance) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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