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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-02-04 07:23 AM


Sweet and Dear Little Graces

Softer eyes broaden unfamiliar feelings
Organic mass of nature living
Infinitesimal nuances of transportable form
Motifs in perspective of natural laws
Voluptuous process of allowing freshly
Webbing patterns subtle progressions
Of insignia
Suspended faults, aborts creative powers
Unique self expression pilgrim of the elements
Simple delights arise and learn
In scarcity exposed and friendless, however ill
Refreshes the little gains by which the soul lets loose
Your pleasure asks for the sweetness of peace
Fair eyes sprout a merit quieted but seen
What expressions can utter this marvelous burn?
What mind turns toward predicting divine?
Magnetic requirements drawn by eagerness
Confining me in such sweet bonds of even sense
Such pleasant irony in the mist of dawn
For all who look for illustrious translations
Balance and teachings of momentous quotation
Connecting….
Practical guides, real and disciplined
Midpoint on premier achievements
Through the womb are truly hours of light
Lips touching fire in nonstop flight
Ambition singing endless cartel
We group close this essential element
My sense of awe and mystery proliferates
Leaving ashen ambiances of every name
In the eavesdropping sky, full flowering claims
Gracious it seams through thousands compassionate
As flesh and blood tenders the essence



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ice
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1 posted 2004-02-04 09:11 AM


Ahh yes, sweet graces....I loved the way they moved through this poem....Passionet questions
"What expressions can utter this marvelous burn?
What mind turns toward predicting divine?"
enjoyed
______ice
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2 posted 2004-02-04 08:16 PM


Lee~
You are such a gracious writer ... this is wonderful and with each read of you, I learn~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-02-04 10:30 PM




(sigh) Oh Lee, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your lungs are filled with many of these graces, yay, you are a blessing encyclopedia, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lee, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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