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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-02-04 07:19 AM


Of Humor

Within the bubble that we blow
Lies the humor of its sew
It has the feel of carbonate
Like a sizzle of elate

It tickles us a sense of feel
The oddest feeling of appeal
Lifts us up within a state
The highest of gesticulate

But do not ask make sense of it
It is a special bird of wit
And changes color with each form
There is no body birth for norm

It plays upon articulate
The storage is of different freight
And weighs upon the scale of blind
That titters the state of mind

So laugh for it is wonders bliss
Implosive as a lovers kiss



© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
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1 posted 2004-02-04 07:49 AM


Right on the mark, Sy.  I wish we had planted some smooches on 'Deer at the appropriate time - lol.
scorpio
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2 posted 2004-02-04 08:35 AM


Laughter is good therapy Sy.  And so are your wonderful writes.

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-02-04 08:43 AM



You wear this mantle
very well...

Good morning, Sy!


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-02-04 08:58 AM


Excellent excellent write dear Sy!
You are a very amazing writer...
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Kie
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5 posted 2004-02-04 10:38 AM


Witty, funny, a nice read. Kie
suthern
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6 posted 2004-02-04 10:52 AM


I like this so much, Seymour... Humor is certainly an excellent steam valve... I couldn't work around attorneys without it! LOL
steavenr
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7 posted 2004-02-04 12:49 PM


ah...yes...laughter doeth good like a medicine...(and that ain't just from the RD )
well written reminder for good mental health

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-02-04 01:22 PM


LngJhnAg
LOL Me too. well maybe next time.

scorpio
Thank you my friend.

Sunshine,
Love you too.

Nancy,
I'll take the hugs and tea.

Kie
Nice of you to say so.

suthern
Glad you enjoyed.

steavenr
Thank you my friend.

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2004-02-04 10:16 PM


Within the bubble that we blow
Lies the humor of its sew
It has the feel of carbonate
Like a sizzle of elate

It tickles us a sense of feel
The oddest feeling of appeal
Lifts us up within a state
The highest of gesticulate

==========================
Could those verses be any cooler????
I'd get fizzy and bubbly with you and Randy anytime LOL


There is a pleasure in the pathless woods.
There is a rapture on the lonely shore.
I love not man the less ... but Nature more.

Lord Byron

celestecat
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10 posted 2004-02-04 10:18 PM


very well written
Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2004-02-04 11:02 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Seymour, there's always room for humor in comedy, and you well represent the whole of it, yay, God Bless You, this is uplifting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-02-05 07:57 AM


JM,
Wonderfyl to see your reply, hope all is well. WWRS

celestecat
Thank you so much.

Thank you Noah.

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