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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-02-04 01:14 AM




"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2004-02-04 01:36 AM


Dang Snow...this is great. The words just set the picture off. It is a perfect melding of the tow mediums. You impress me yet again. Bravo!

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passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-02-04 02:06 AM


beautiful! I love the way you do these!
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3 posted 2004-02-04 02:10 AM


Kevin, thank you so very much for your thoughts!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.


passing shadows.. the poem was written last year, the image i found today and just knew it went with this piece. thanks so much for your comment :-)
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


Richy
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4 posted 2004-02-04 04:26 AM





OH MY, Snow!

This was amazing!

Are you trying... to give the fellah’s around here a heart attack?

Because you just about did...

OH Wait!
Oh, ok, I’m alright...

Whew!

Snow, this was as sensual, as sensual can be.

What a wonderful talent you have



I better not read it again though...

Well... maybe just this one more time...

Owch!

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2004-02-05 01:09 AM


...an intriguing proposition...

-MVS

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Snow
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6 posted 2004-02-05 09:21 AM


now richy, if i did that... it would defeat the purpose of hoping for readers .. lol . thank you so very much for your thoughts!


and i'm glad you're alright.. lol


MVS, glad you think so.
snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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