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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-02-04 12:32 PM



when love is remembered
the heart is lonely
the soul is lost
the mind is numbed
when love is remembered

all that is, is forgotten
for the decays of days bygone


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McLean
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since 2004-01-05
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state of marital bliss
1 posted 2004-02-04 01:27 AM


When love is remembered, for me,

the heart is happy
the soul is found
the mind is freed
when love is remembered

all that is, is all the better
because of days bygone


I enjoyed playing on your canvas.

McLean

steavenr
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2 posted 2004-02-04 01:57 AM



ah...but the sense is in the tense...but

glad you enjoyed the canvas

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-04 02:11 AM


true
iliana
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4 posted 2004-02-05 11:57 PM


Again, another good one!
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