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vlraynes
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0 posted 2004-02-04 12:29 PM



Whiskered Kisses

They say our love will never last
but my commitment's unsurpassed
Yes, opposites attract it's true
and there's no doubt I'm drawn to you

It matters not what people say
I'll stay beside you come what may
You are my catnip...I'm your cheese
You make my heart skip...what a tease

Our love is here in black and white
I care not if it's wrong or right
They'll see that we're the perfect match
I'll prove to them you're quite a catch

What's that you say?...you think I might
in taste of you find sheer delight?
An offer such as this, my dear
I can't resist, but have no fear

Though whiskered kisses soft and sweet
are tempting me I shall not eat
one such as you my rodent fair
Just, trust me please...I wouldn't dare

Come closer - let me taste your lips
and wrap my paws around your hips
That's it...come on...move closer still
I just can't wait to get my fill

Burp!


~Vicky L. Raynes

*Another repost...with a smile...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

© Copyright 2004 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
GG
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1 posted 2004-02-04 12:32 PM


rofl this is just ADORABLE!
I love it!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

McLean
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2 posted 2004-02-04 01:30 AM


Absolutely cartoonish and wonderful to experience!

McLean

Richy
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3 posted 2004-02-04 02:20 AM



Wow, fatal attraction huh?

Well, that what happens when you rat someone out...

It's kinda funny, I just got through writing about a cat of mine on McLean's post
about her poor dog Freckles, and here's your poem Vicky, with a picture of a little black cat just like the one we rescued in October.

He's my little buddy.

Thanks for posting this Vicky.
I really liked it alot!




passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-02-04 03:09 AM


this is so CUTE!
Poet deVine
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5 posted 2004-02-04 03:42 AM


LOL...ok..look deep into that kitty's eyes and tell me it's love. (Or is it hunger?)

Adorable Vicky!!

Martie
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6 posted 2004-02-04 02:05 PM


Very cute, Vicky..it really is amazing how different animals get along when given the opportunity...I've seen it many times.  Hugs!
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7 posted 2004-02-04 02:09 PM


ahahahaha...Vicky, another one for
my "Friends folder".
Hugs to you,
Ethel

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8 posted 2004-02-04 05:42 PM


and

(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, though I don't like sad endings and that ending made me sad as I love mice too and that mouse was soooooo cute, this is such a cute poem anyway, sweet friend, yay, now tell me that it was a happy ending, now now now! (does cute whiny cherub fit) LOL! This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
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9 posted 2004-02-04 05:45 PM


What a laugh! Grover.
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