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0 posted 2004-02-03 10:34 PM


    

LOVER BOY
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/11/01

    

I am your lovely boy
You hold a place deep inside of me
Together in harmony we'll join
I belong to your heart, glowing heavenly sweet

Your sighs are like raindrops, waking my hearts flowers
Angel hair waving in the wind blanketing my heart in silk
Tapestry of words woven with emotions cotterpin, tied in the breath of a lover
My heart melting, waterfalls in your eyes cascading like milk

    

Your lips thrust out in jubilee, darts to the heart conducting thanksgivings concord
I swallow the light of your laughter, blazing like the suns soft rays
Your love revolves around my heart, you are my lover girl and so much more
I always feel that harbinger of spring when I look at you, through every lovingly gaze

Please let me be your lover boy
You are my lover girl
You fill me with infinite joy
You light my heart, you light my world

    

    



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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McLean
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1 posted 2004-02-03 10:41 PM


Your poems as of late are so smiley!  This is candy-sweet!  What is a candy heart poem, exactly?

I love 'em!

McLean

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2 posted 2004-02-03 10:49 PM


Noah,
"I swallow the light of your laughter, blazing like the suns soft rays"

Beautiful words...great photographs; cute, too!
Enjoyed,
         ~Sadelite

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2004-02-03 11:49 PM


This is so romantic. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kahlil
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4 posted 2004-02-03 11:58 PM


Oh gosh, Noah, you say the things I always wished to hear!  ~K~
iliana
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5 posted 2004-02-05 11:54 PM


Noah -- notwithstanding the absolutely wonderful photos, I really, really enjoyed all your imagery.  I especially liked:
"I swallow the light of your laughter, blazing like the suns soft rays
Your love revolves around my heart"

hugs to you......jo

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