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BluesSerenade
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0 posted 2004-02-03 09:02 PM



~*~

I don't have a poetic reply or a fancy card to send
I only have my heart on paper to post
glittered with sequin sparkles
trimmed in satin around the edge.

Rounding out the curves
white laced with curled ribbons
transpire beneath pastel tissues
in shades of blue and violet reds.

For that is how I picture you
one thousand decorations
a Valentine's celebration
a special occasion of the heart.

~That inspires my affection for confection~

~*~

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-02-03 09:06 PM



And a lovely Valentine it is Bluesy!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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2 posted 2004-02-03 09:11 PM


Oh yes, anyone would be glad to
get a valentine like this from
the heart, Lori.
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-02-03 09:33 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I beliee ones own feelings from the heart expressed is the perfect Valentines gift, yay, and best of all, it's free! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Richy
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4 posted 2004-02-04 01:40 AM



Wow, what a feeling that must be for someone to make
something that beautiful for you on Valentines Day.

Dang, now I’m getting a little depressed... lol

I hope you know your a real sweetheart Bluesy

“only, your heart?”

Wow, you might as well of said,

only, all the stars, in the sky...


passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-02-04 02:05 AM


this is so sweet!
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-02-04 06:23 AM


and a ~good morning smile~ for you, Lori

hugs
M

ice
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7 posted 2004-02-04 06:41 AM


Sweet.....
_______ice
  ><>

iliana
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8 posted 2004-02-04 02:33 PM


Oh, Bluesy, this was lovely!
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9 posted 2004-02-04 06:40 PM


You don't need any of those things....as you know.... All you need is you.

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Duncan
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10 posted 2004-02-05 02:14 PM


Remember the Valentine's boxes ya made in school?  Reminded me of those.  Bet your's was frilly...    (runnin' and duckin'...)
"Sweet" write Bluesy.  Got chocolate?  

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2004-02-05 10:50 PM


sweet!!!!!!!!!!
luv ya girlfriend
have a happy

BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2004-02-06 08:37 PM


You're all hearts and flowers!  

Thanks a bunch you guys!


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