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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-02-03 09:02 PM



Picture by Jim Warren

* * *

This was written while I was
away on holiday recently.
It was a cold and miserable
day and I sat inside
the house where we were staying
and wrote this.

* * *
Outside the wind is raging
And the birds struggle to fly
There are white caps in abundance
And dark clouds fill the sky

I see the storm approaching
From the land across the sea
I watch the cows graze in the meadow
Here I'm as cosy as can be

The dry grass bows reluctantly
To the wind that blows so strong
There is no hint of sunshine
It's been absent for so long

But I am constantly inspired
By all that is around me
As I paint for you a picture
From this house down by the sea

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-03 09:05 PM


Hi Sue...
Wonderful imagery once again in this lovely piece.
Very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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2 posted 2004-02-03 09:15 PM


Very beautiful Sue. It's
so good to feel peaceful.
Hugs,
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-02-03 09:39 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, even on dark and gray days I believe there is beauty in the calm and serenity and the rain and dew as He is preparing His rain spell to purify the earth, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I hope you had a wonderful holiday, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

McLean
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4 posted 2004-02-03 11:09 PM


The coast does inspire, doesn't it?

My mother lives on a sand dune in North Carolina.  Your writing reminded me of her safe haven...her Heaven on earth.  

McLean

SmartChick
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5 posted 2004-02-03 11:17 PM


Oh Sue, you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful poetry. I always enjoy it, so much.
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6 posted 2004-02-04 02:14 AM


how do you do it all the time? I'm amazed!
Kie
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7 posted 2004-02-04 11:02 AM


Beautiful & perfect. Kie
Richy
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8 posted 2004-02-04 11:13 AM




And what a beautiful picture it is Sue!

You're going to have a whole book soon
of your wonderful picture/poems.

And I'll be waiting to buy the first copy!


Now I'm thinking what? About a 15 percent discount?

Ten?

Btw, what is the current exchange rate in Australia?

You know I'm teasing right

Seriously... five percent would be more then generous...
Two and a half?  



iliana
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9 posted 2004-02-06 12:11 PM


This is uplifting, Sue!
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10 posted 2004-02-07 06:26 PM


Sue:  Too bad it was so stormy while you were on vacation.  It did give you inspiration for a good poem though!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2004-02-07 08:53 PM


Sue~
Seems this 'holiday' was found inside the heart and mind of a lovely poetess~
Thanks for the poetic postcard~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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