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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2004-02-03 07:33 PM


I love you so much
I wish never to lose you
If I ever did lose you
I could never go on

I want us to be together forever
Never to be separated
Until death do us part
Which still isn't long enough

I want you in my life
Forever
Like they say when you get married
"To have and to hold"
That is what I want
My love

Cold hands means a warm heart

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scorpio
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1 posted 2004-02-03 07:41 PM


May it come true for you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-02-03 07:42 PM


Here's hoping for you. Grover
Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2004-02-03 07:55 PM


Hi Julie

This was a beautiful outpouring of love.  I wish for you much love and happiness.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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4 posted 2004-02-03 08:12 PM


How do you do it Julie? You always write a poem that speaks to the soul and tells a tale of love, just as I tell tales of adventure with my poetry.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-02-03 09:00 PM


Julie, this is really a good
love poem. You know this
hopeless romantic likes it.
Hugs  
Ethel

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-02-03 09:03 PM



Beautifully said Julie...lovely Valentine.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2004-02-03 11:01 PM




(sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I wish this joy for you so much and it shall come to you, yay, He has a plan filled with rainbows, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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8 posted 2004-02-06 11:50 AM


It does happen...the right one is there, waiting. Maybe he's the one...I hope so.

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