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PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-02-03 06:52 PM

She is the opium of my eye,
that soothes me threw the violent storm;
the eternal flame that ignites within me,
to makes my dying spirit reform.

[This message has been edited by PassionatelyRomantic (02-04-2004 03:25 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-02-03 07:36 PM

This is very beautifully written. So romantic!!!!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2004-02-03 07:59 PM

Wow, Jared

Your words speak of such a very special love and were so beautifully written. These words would sweep any girl off her feet.

"Love.......'tis second life,
it grows into the soul,
warms every vein, and
beats in every pulse"

I'll look forward to reading more of your wonderful words.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-02-03 09:55 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, the ending felt a bit sad to me but I know with such gorgeous words like these you are bound to win any special girl's heart and make her heart sing happily, yay! (big angel hugs) I wish wonderful things for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

4 posted 2004-02-03 10:47 PM

Mighty Bosom

HAHAHA!  I appologize.  I feel like a school kid, though.  It was hard for me to get past that word coupling.

mighty bosom

Nope...still laughing at that.

I would think my husband would say that your Autumn and I share a resemblance there.

Ha!

Okay...the poem was really swell...dotted with your eloquent way of description.  Beautiful, really.

but...

mighty bosom has me rolling!

McLean

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