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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2004-02-03 05:14 PM



Mine
~ By Sue ~

My heart is still there
Wherever you are right now
Return it to me
Since we are no longer one
It belongs only to me

2-3-04

© Copyright 2004 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-02-03 05:16 PM



A heart is not quite the same
as a ring or other gift, is it Sue?
You know, you've come a long way
in your writing...

I'm looking forward to your future.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-02-03 05:16 PM


takes time..but it does become yours and yours only eventually.

hugs
M

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-02-03 05:57 PM


Hi Sue!
Karilea is so right..
You have come a long way...
not only in your writing but
in your personal life as well.
~Big hugs to you sweetie~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2004-02-03 11:29 PM




(sigh) Yay, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you go girl, get back what is rightfully yours! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, you shine, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

McLean
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since 2004-01-05
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state of marital bliss
5 posted 2004-02-04 01:32 AM


You know, in divorce orders, a fair and equal distribution of property doesn't specify one's heart, does it?

McLean

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-02-04 03:10 AM


yeah, I know what you mean...it's not fair that they keep it even after it is over with
Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2004-02-04 09:21 AM


Dear Sue, you express a justified thought! And you do it with charm.
Love and hugs. Margherita

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2004-02-04 08:22 PM


SweetSuzieQ~
Yeah ... this is darned good !!!
Nice to see you making some time to devote to your writing and sharing with us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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