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Richy
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0 posted 2004-02-03 04:38 PM



The Jungle Look

The Rare Necessities

Look for those, rare accessories
Those simple rare accessories
To take away the worries, and the strife

I mean those rare accessories
Not Betty Crocker’s recipe's
That bring some needed pleasure to your life

It could be a nose ring...
or maybe a clip
It may be a tongue post...
that rubs on your lip

It doesn’t matter what it may be
It may be something you will not see

So go and get the best
Then go get the rest
That you’re going to need

Yes it’s those, fair accessories
Those simple rare necessities
That take away the worries of mid-life

Yes it’s those rare accessories
Those simple fair necessities
That sometimes almost cut you like a knife


Now whether I’m working...
or whether I’m home
In this great land where...
the buffalo roam

There’s people buzzing, all around me
I’m trying to get a cup, of coffee

I take a look,
at the fancy treats
and maybe try a few...

Cause it’s those rare necessities,
that give us the intensities
To help us get through,
one more day of life

Yes it’s those, rare necessities
The coffees, milk, and juice and teas,
that give us all the energies in life

Now they have some fruit now,
that we can all choose
And we have this weight now,
that we can all lose

So go and pick a piece of nice fruit
Make sure you pick one that is a beaut
Just don’t forget, all the magic fruits,
that make you want to toot!

Yes it’s those, rare necessities,
that give us the intensities
That help us to,
get rid of all our strife

Yes it’s those rare necessities,
The coffees, milk, and juice, and teas,
that give you all the energy in life

Now if you pick the cooked pears,
cause you don’t like raw
And you put the raw pears
straight into your jaws

Don’t pick the pears, if they are all raw
you might as well have chose a bear claw

The sickely pears, with somebody’s hairs,
can make you want to Ralph!

Cause, it’s those rare necessities,
those simple rare accessories
that help us to,
get rid of all our strife

Yes it’s those rare necessities,
The coffees, milk, and juice, and teas
that give us all the energies in life

They’re working in factories,
some most of their life
They’re building refractories,
then go see their wife

And then they have a nice daiquiri
So they can numb a few faculties

Their lives are rough
The times are tough

So what more can we to do?


Yes it’s those, rare necessities,
that give us the intensities
That help us to,
get rid of all our strife

Yes it’s those rare necessities,
The coffees, milks, and, daiquiri's
That help us get through
one more day in life


Now baby went poo poo...
his tushy is raw
The owl went hoo hoo...
the raven went CAW!

Poor mom is at the end of her rope
She doesn’t know if she can still cope

Her husband lost his job
She’s just about to sob

He gives her a hug

Yes it’s those bare necessities
The simple bare necessities
That help us get through
one more day in life

Yes it’s those bare necessities
Not all those rare accessories
That really truly matter in our lives


[This message has been edited by Richy (02-04-2004 05:46 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-02-03 04:47 PM


I know exactly what you mean Richy!
It can be a relaxing whirlpool for me,
or my treasured ankle bracelet...
sometimes..peanut butter chocolate chunk cookies do the trick.
Yup..I know where you're coming from.
Clever write my friend.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

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2 posted 2004-02-03 04:55 PM




(giggles in delight) Yay! Awwwwwww, I love that Jungle Book song,

"Look for the bare necessities,
those simple bare necessities,
forget about your worries and your strife.
I mean those bare necessities,
Old Mother Nature's recipes
That brings the bare necessities of life."




(does happy bear dance) Yay! That is one of my favorite songs ever, hehehe, the simple blessings are what are most beautiful and your golden heart isfull of them, sweet friend, yay, let's go splash in the spring puddles in happy dance, yay, and remember...

"...when you pick a pawpaw
Or a prickly pear
And you prick a raw paw
Next time beware
Don't pick the prickly pear by the paw
When you pick a pear
Try to use the claw
But you don't need to use the claw
When you pick a pear of the big pawpaw
Have I given you a clue?"



(giggles in delight) Hehehe...I think Baloo means to say you can just reach for the stars with your own two hands and seek the beautues of life, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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3 posted 2004-02-03 06:29 PM


LOL, so playful...
but you are right..what really matters in life i was you give with your heart/soul, a hug really is a bare necessity.


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4 posted 2004-02-03 08:09 PM


WORDS OF A WISE MAN....

YEP!  They are all we need.

Grover
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5 posted 2004-02-03 08:18 PM


Amen. You'd make a good rap artist! Grover.
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6 posted 2004-02-03 08:59 PM


Richy, I love this and the link in it are really neat!!
LOL
This was a really cute write!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

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7 posted 2004-02-03 10:16 PM


Richy,
   Great play and work here!  This was so easy and fun to follow, it practically sang itself!   Much enjoyed...
               ~Sadelite~

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8 posted 2004-02-03 10:16 PM


Richy,
   Great play and work here!  This was so easy and fun to follow, it practically sang itself!   Much enjoyed...
               ~Sadelite~

WHOOPS!  I GUESS MY POST GOES DOUBLE!  Sorry, I must have hit the button twice...

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9 posted 2004-02-03 10:21 PM


Yes it’s those bare necessities
Not all those rare accessories
That really truly matter in our lives

says it all~
and btw, I happen to like pears!!!
Cute write Richy~


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10 posted 2004-02-03 10:38 PM


You are simply rolling these days, my friend!  Great fun this was!

McLean

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11 posted 2004-02-04 03:20 AM


a great piece...long...but excellent!

I enjoy your sense of humor

Richy
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12 posted 2004-02-04 03:26 AM



Nancy ~ Thanks Nancy... for me, it’s my peanut butter chocolate chunk ankle bracelet... It’s kinda nice to wear snacks, just in case you get the munchies... but then, that’s just me... lol

Noah ~ Yeah Noah, I’ll never forget going to this big fancy theater to go see, The Jungle Book when I was still a youngster... Well, at least it looked like a big theater at the time, the last I heard, they turned it into this sleazy little adult film theater... Sheesh  

muted ~ So true Dawn. Especially if someone’s giving you the Heimlich maneuver.  Not so much, if it‘s a bear hug... from an actual bear...

Magnus ~ Thank You Magnus. Yeah, it’s amazing how precious, a real and sincere hug can be.

Grover ~ A rap artist ‘eh?  Fahshizzle? Yo Brah, that wuz jus too mad fresh!  Seriously Homeslice, Love, Peace, and Chicken Grease...I’m Out!

Ethel ~ Thanks so much Ethel! Ethel, can you see links in this post? If you can give me a hollah (reply... lol)  I think I have this darn adware in my pc, that’s bugging the crudcakes out of me... ! ...

Sadelite ~ Thanks Sadelite! Now if we can just get them to write themselves... then we could really do some writing huh?      Thanks Again!

Sadelite ~ Thanks Sadelite! Now if we can just get them to write themselves... then we could really do some writing huh?      Thanks Again!

Hey, what can I say folks... she replied twice...

Richy
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13 posted 2004-02-04 03:29 AM




Bluesy ~ You like pears Bluesy?  Really! Me too! I grew up next door to this humongous pear orchard when I was but a tyke.

Truthfully and honestly... I’m sick of pears... lol  I used to eat them when they were still hard and green. Hey, what can I say... with so many brothers, there was never all that much fruit in the house.

I like other kinds of fruit though... how do you feel about apricots...  

Thanks for reading this Bluesy.
I hope all is great with you, and yours...




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14 posted 2004-02-04 03:31 AM



And it's this kiiiiind of poetry
that puts a frazzled mind at ease
and brings a needed smile my life  

I enjoyed this, Richy...

Thanks for the smile and the reminder, my friend...



"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Richy
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15 posted 2004-02-04 03:36 AM



McLean ~ Well, you know what they say about a certain something that rolls down hill... ? ... either way... I’m going to take that as a compliment... lol  Thanks McLean!

Dixie ~ You enjoy my sense of humor?  Oh you poor little thing... you know, they have ways to treat that nowadays... lol  Thanks Dixie, I hope things are going good for you!


Richy
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16 posted 2004-02-04 03:41 AM





Thanks so much Vicky
Putting a smile on your face,
puts one on mine too.

I hope everything's going well for you.

So nice to hear from you!




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17 posted 2004-02-04 04:26 AM


that's something to ponder at
ice
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18 posted 2004-02-04 06:55 AM


Bravo! excellent read for me this morning...
Thank you, I really needed to wake up to a good song.....
_______ice
  ><>

(Thank you for the smiley advice....as you can see, I learned how to do it)

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19 posted 2004-02-04 07:13 AM


I'm grinning from ear to ear! Thank you Richy.

regards
colbalt

HopeS
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20 posted 2004-02-04 09:24 AM


Hey this was a fun read Richy , it had quite a beat , you had me tapping my feet LOL
Hope
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21 posted 2004-02-04 09:51 AM


good stuff - turned my thinking on this morning. Good reminder
Kie
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22 posted 2004-02-04 10:34 AM


This made me smile, simply adorable. Kie
Richy
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23 posted 2004-02-04 12:10 PM




Lahoa ~ You know what Lahoa, I hadn't really thought about it that way, but your right, I guess you can! Thank you for taking the time to leave me a reply. Welcome to Passions, and I hope you like it around here. I'm pretty sure you will.

Ice ~ Hey thanks Ice. Now I hope you weren't getting any strange looks as you were singing this song this morning... lol Oh, and your welcome on the smiley advice. You know, when you reply to someone's post, at the bottom of that page there's a quick view section with all the different smilies right at your disposal... Hey, thanks for telling me and Ice everybody!   LOL

cobalt ~ Hey thank you cobalt! Welcome to PIP! And thanks for reading, and the nice reply. I appreciate that. It's nice meeting you.

Hope ~ Thanks so much Hope. It's nice to see you here. You live out in Australia too? How nice. And thanks for the adware link. I went ahead and downloaded it, and disabled the one I just spent $29.95 on. I'll let you know it works any better. I'll tell you one thing. It found over a hundred little buggers on the first run. So thank you again!

Copperbell ~ Hi Copperbell, it's nice to meet you. Glad you liked it. And thanks so much for the kind remarks!

Kie ~ Oh Kie, thanks, that was nice of you to say. Thanks for coming by.


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