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0 posted 2004-02-03 03:32 PM


    

THAT SMILE
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/16/02

    

The first day I met you
That smile you wore on your face
Made me feel so happy knowing your love was true
Your sunshine helped me rejuvenate

That smile you have is like a bouquet
Your sighs are like babys breath
The way you dance and sway under skies of parfet
Your tawny hair shimmers and brings my heart to rest

    

Knowing you wear that smile
Everyday feels like Mardi Gras
Just the thought of being with you for every while
Brings heaven to my heart, my sweet madonna

That smile you wear
Always makes me fall in love all over again
That smile you wear
Makes me want to love you again and again

    



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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1 posted 2004-02-03 03:42 PM


Oh how adorable Noah!!!
Both the words and the pictures...perfect!
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2004-02-03 07:16 PM


This is so romantic. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2004-02-03 07:46 PM


Wonderful and romantic Noah.

believe in what your heart feels...

Grover
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4 posted 2004-02-03 07:51 PM


Truly, a stirring romantic poem. A very good write! Grover.
Kie
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5 posted 2004-02-04 10:25 AM


I truly loved those pictures. I thought your poem was really cute. Kie
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