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ctowen
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0 posted 2004-02-03 02:23 PM


~~ * ~~~ * ~~~ * ~~

from Lover's Leap
the wading night calls
incoming daze creep
-Heartbreak Falls

heartache pours
drowning tomorrows
this heart of yours
deep in sorrows

timeless pains
of broken dreams
empty rains
tears and streams

but life begins
after each deadly storm
it never ends
true to form

'til love is found
endless in sharing
two hearts that pound
unconditioned and caring

from Lover's Leap
where the wind squalls
love will grow deep
and heartbreak falls

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2004-02-03 02:31 PM


Enjoyed and related to this wise observation -- it cascaded in its own "write"...

-MVS

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-02-03 03:21 PM


unconditioned and caring

from Lover's Leap
where the wind squalls
love will grow deep
and heartbreak falls
enjoyed your words Craig...especially these
hugs
M

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2004-02-03 03:42 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I'd much rather go to Lover's Leap then where everyone can glide out of the tears into unconditional pearly depths, yay, God Bless You, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2004-02-03 04:49 PM


beautiful and heartfelt tho sad, but always true to your words u are
inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-02-08 03:38 PM


had to bump
felt like playing a little leapfrog with u

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-02-08 03:45 PM


Excellent Craig..
Love the way this cascaded down the page.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~
                
            

iliana
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USA
7 posted 2004-02-10 11:53 PM


Heartgrabbing write!
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-02-11 04:36 AM


you know me well
Death
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Twilight
9 posted 2004-02-11 05:06 AM


You capture the trials and trepidations well.

Compliments
D

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

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