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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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0 posted 2004-02-03 11:51 AM

Here’s the poem
I promised you
it’s not much
but will have to do
I would’ve tried harder
but you know it’s true
your team cheated
so I lost to you

Here’s the poem
just a bit late
there was snow to shovel
and soups to make
dogs to walk
milk to shake
clocks to set
excuses to make

Here’s the poem
I wagered in jest
my due now paid
please let me to rest
to ponder the matter
by which I’m distressed
I sat through the game
but missed Janet’s best

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-02-03 11:55 AM

ROFL...
and on all subsequent newscasts, too?

Too clever, you!

Do it again!

McLean
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since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

2 posted 2004-02-03 11:57 AM

Was it Janet's best, really? I wasn't impressed. But, then again, I'm just a she.

Oh...or maybe that was a typo...did you mean "Janet's breast?

Cute poem. Is your debt repaid in full, or can we expect some more fun to read words?

McLean

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-02-03 11:58 AM

yeah, but even if you
missed it, you had a chance to see
it many times over!! LOL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2004-02-03 12:59 PM

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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5 posted 2004-02-03 01:11 PM

lol! Good one!

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

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6 posted 2004-02-03 02:02 PM

rofl... and the worst part? it rhymed!!!

nn
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since 2000-09-18

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7 posted 2004-02-03 02:13 PM

Great

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-02-03 02:14 PM

Gee...I'm feeling kinda left out that I didn't see Janet's best!
But, being a woman...I don't mind.

Good one Dunc!
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

9 posted 2004-02-03 03:00 PM

clever write and extremely clever word choice on the last word of all LOL

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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10 posted 2004-02-03 03:23 PM

(giggles in delight) LOL! I'll never have anything to do with any Super Bowl but I saw the clip (censored of course) of Janet and Justin's porn half-time and it was just disturbing and intentional! (sad sigh) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2004-02-03 05:57 PM

That's the way the football fumbles I guess.
Was worth the poem though, in spite of your excuses.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2004-02-03 06:04 PM

Duncan
Cute write enjoyed the read.

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