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cinnamongirl
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0 posted 2004-02-03 09:47 AM




Every breath is a whispered prayer
                                  of hope
                                       of dreams
                                             of fear

released.

Every breath is soft silent desire
                                 of love
                                       of peace
                                           of dreams

awakened.



And every breath speaks voicelessly
                        of gentle divinity
                               of sacred reality
                                     of God Herself-

free.

So close your eyes... be
                       unafraid... to
                             allow yourself to
                                          breathe...



© Copyright 2004 Moca - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-02-03 11:08 AM



Ah, now that deep breath
and sweet poem
was JUST what I needed!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-02-03 11:15 AM


cinnamongirl
A delicious read, ennjoyed.

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3 posted 2004-02-03 11:21 AM


Moca~
My goodness ... what delicately lovely thougths~
A true joy to read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-02-03 11:27 AM


This is beautiful!!
Happy one year Anniversary, too!!
Hugs  
Ethel

Ericc
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5 posted 2004-02-03 11:54 AM


Beautiful Moca.

Love,
Eric

McLean
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6 posted 2004-02-03 12:05 PM


Thoroughly, I enjoy the style you choose to write in.  Fits the title and meaning to a T.

McLean

cinnamongirl
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7 posted 2004-02-03 12:18 PM


Thank you all!  
passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-02-03 12:39 PM


AWESOME
iliana
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9 posted 2004-02-03 01:33 PM


Cinnamongirl -- This was lovely.  I wish that were true for all who breathed -- the world would be a different place.  
Margherita
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10 posted 2004-02-04 10:08 AM


You show a beautiful awareness of your breath.
Very nicely presented.
Love, Margherita

Richy
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11 posted 2004-02-04 10:23 AM




I enjoyed this very much!

Thanks Cinnamongirl





jaicie114
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12 posted 2004-02-08 11:12 PM


Moca...this is stunning in both content and form.  Thank you so much!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Cerenity
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13 posted 2004-02-08 11:45 PM


Hi Cinnamongirl,

This is lovely, so enjoyed and nice to meet you (~.~)

Cerenity

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14 posted 2004-02-09 01:54 AM


cinnamongirl, this is so pretty.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Hugs  
Ethel

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15 posted 2004-02-09 09:12 AM


A lovely poem, thank you for sharing it.
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16 posted 2004-02-09 09:19 AM


A beautiful peaceful and inspiring poem!
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