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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 thoughts of you MP3 "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
wow, this was powerful when I read it... and then when I heard it.. wow, I'm speechless... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
the reading goes with the first version of this poem, but i wasn't happy ... it needed to be a lot tighter for me. however, i am glad you liked both. thank you very much. snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
The writing and the performance, both, were excellent. A little curious about the discrepancies between the two. Personally liked the small differences in the vocal rendition. -*-*- |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
But you answered my question as I was typing it. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
BAM! love it Michelle |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love it! I confess I like this version better then the MP3 version...but it was still darn nice to be able to put a voice to the words I was reading. It brought the whole image to life. I could see you sitting at a darkened poetry reading...softly veiled in shadow...reciting the words that came from the heart. Bravo! This just made my #1 must read (and hear) poem of the day. Great piece...you should be proud of it. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how this feels...well, I remember |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Snow... This one, I really enjoyed. Guess it's because I relate to the feeling of being enveloped in thoughts of someone. It's a good, suffocating thing!  McLean |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I know I read this one before...and you'd think after sepnding 4 hours this morning shoveling the SNOW from my driveway I wouldn't want to see anymore...but I just had to come visit this piece again. It's just that darn good. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Ok, that's it... Forget the shower, I'm taking a bath tonight... Well, actually this morning... Now if I can only find my litte rubber ducky... You have a wonderful style of writing Snow! |
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