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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2004-02-02 11:52 PM

In the Sun of our daydreams,
our love is just a mirage.
It flutters in and out:
there but not there.
I look beyond the horizon
with eyes filled with the shimmer
of your face, your body.
You are beyond the veil
where love enthrones you
declares you to be. I reach
for you time and again;
but you are not real,
only an illusion
of what might have been.

Yet, in the Sun of our daydreams,
love has been evaporated;
condensed into the mystical.
I wait for your shadow
to be led into the light.
My horizon filled with the image
of your arms, your smile:
there but not there,
all of my dreams of two.
Your heartbeat pulsing
in and out of your bronzed chest,
a mirage of the unexpected.

Nothing is real until you and I
slip into the light of the Sun, sharing
in the rise and fall of Love's mirage.

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2004-02-02 11:59 PM

wonderful thoughts to drift among tonight

enjoyed

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-02-02 11:59 PM

Oh, Ivy Rose, this is pure magic. And that "illusion of what might have been" sometimes can hurt pretty deeply, too.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-02-03 12:00 PM

This is so beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-02-03 02:50 AM

Nothing is real until you and I
slip into the light of the Sun, sharing
in the rise and fall of Love's mirage.

How true,,,enjoyed
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2004-02-04 12:06 PM

"Nothing is real until you and I
slip into the light of the Sun, sharing
in the rise and fall of Love's mirage."

This is lovely, Ivy Rose...
Beautifully done...
"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-04 03:12 AM

eloquently done

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-02-04 08:18 PM

IvyRose~
This is such a lovely write~
A delight to read you dear poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Pezz1
Junior Member

since 2002-10-27

Posts 33
Scotland

8 posted 2004-02-04 08:39 PM

this is beautiful a wonderful read, really enjoyed it

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

9 posted 2004-02-04 09:29 PM

Just a great poem. Grover.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2004-02-04 10:49 PM

(smiles) Oh Ivy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and the sun is a mirage that couldn't be any more real, yay! (kiss on cheek) May the halo swallow you in, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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