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Sweet Flame
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Sweet Flame |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58
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These sweet little thoughts Are burning bright in the dark Lighting up my room Cutting through the gloom Sweet little thoughts of you Like a candle’s flame they grew If only you knew… * * * * * * * * I wrote it while watching a candle burn and listening to music. "if only you knew"... she doesn't know how I feel yet. I want to tell her eye to eye. not over the phone, even though she asked me too say something. Its not really finnished yet but I needed to just get it out to someone(s) |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Very subtle little poem that speaks of love in the background. Great images. So much said in so few words. ***Ivy Rose |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Sweet little thoughts of you Like a candle’s flame they grew If only you knew…" Very nice! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
no time like the present...go tell her...it may be the nicest thing she has heard all year...h |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Sweet images,,and thought tell her Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
go with your heart and you can not be wrong |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... welcome to Passions! *S* |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
I want to wait untell I see her but its become so hard to see her for some reason. I don't want to tell her over the phone but looks like I might have to. What should I do *sigh* |
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