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Simply For You (a duet)
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Simply For You (a duet) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SIMPLY FOR YOU” ~~~~ These trees have just unraveled, there is too much empty space again, my heart had barely welcomed you, you were never one cloaked in mystique, how foolishly I overlooked this at first not to have seen right before these jaded eyes, the bliss and joy of a love that was simply there for me… Trees sigh this night in lost moments as their leaves strip limbs to bare, this heart beat in rhythm to dream, always open, waiting for your thoughts, not hidden, for it was ready for a word, a sign, yet your eyes were closed to a romantic beckoning, this love was there simply for you… ~~~~ by Inkedgoddess & Bill Charles |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very inspired. Well written poem! Grover. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
A gorgeous poem from a pair of talented poets. There is such longing in the words. Very well expressed with great imagery. ***Ivy Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Great write, you both have done very well with this. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very nice Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write....very well done you two! ~Hugs to you both~ ~ At the touch of love |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friends, this is a most gorgeous collaboration, God Bless You Both, this is simply both you, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Bill and Michele, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Outstanding you guys! This is beautiful! TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was really lovely, you two! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Bill and Inked,,,very good job, many kudos Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 damn! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love both your style and here your combined charm unfolds magically. Very romantic. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice !!! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Kudos to both! Well done |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InkyOne & BillCharles~ This piece is an absolute beauty woven so caressingly tender in your poetic thoughts~ *sigh* *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a beautiful duet this is!! Thanks for sharing. Hugs to you both, Ethel |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful poem by a talented duo. I hope you team up again. believe in what your heart feels... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks, it was as always a pleasure working with bill |
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