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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-02-02 07:41 PM

I walk alone along the shore
Barefoot am I on the sand
I close my eyes and imagine
You walk with me hand in hand

We stand beside the water
As I gaze up at your face
You move your body closer
As our fingers interlace

Your kiss is filled with passion
As our senses come alive
So much love and affection
Can be seen within your eyes

The seabirds fly above us
The wind assisting them in flight
But I awaken from my dream
And you disappear from sight

I hope one day you'll return
And never feel the need to roam
Because I've waited for so long
For you to call my heart your home

* * *

"Love is the may-day of the heart"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Amara
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 158
East of the moon, west of the sun.

1 posted 2004-02-02 07:44 PM

I hope one day you'll return
And never feel the need to roam
Because I've waited for so long
For you to call my heart your home

Gorgeous.

Light keep you always,
Amara

May light keep you, faith guide you, and love and laughter always find you.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-02-02 07:47 PM

Nice poem... I hope your dreams come true! Grover.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-02-02 11:45 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I know this yearning so well as I dream of the day when I hold the hand of my dream girl for the first time and walk beside her happily, God Bless You, and may you tread softly on loves sands forever, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-02-03 12:17 PM

love is the may-day of the heart -- wow!

This was lovely, Sue.

....jo

Guardurthoughts
Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 66

5 posted 2004-02-03 01:47 AM

"We stand beside the water
As I gaze up at your face
You move your body closer
As our fingers interlace"

This line especially got to me...because I myself have wandered the oceans edge dreaming about the man i loved and lost. Great.

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~

"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2004-02-03 03:13 AM

I hope one day you'll return
And never feel the need to roam
Because I've waited for so long
For you to call my heart your home

Hope the wait is worth what you get
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2004-02-03 03:25 AM

Having gone to the coast this weekend, the views of this are even more vivid upon my mind...
But then with the end it stings, and aches... I wish the beauty for you, and hope that soon it is more then just a dream.

Take care...
Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-02-03 05:08 AM

as always...you touch me

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2004-02-03 05:36 AM

The heart longings were felt ,
I walk the shore daily with the same thoughts in mind

Hope

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2004-02-03 05:39 AM

By the way Sue ... wonderful Steve hanks painting , so many of his works seem to match my feelings

Hope

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

11 posted 2004-02-03 05:42 AM

Just lovely Sue, very much enjoyed and well written.

Sincerely
Rick

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

12 posted 2004-02-03 06:45 PM

Sue, the picture was beautiful

And the poem was amazing

I can really relate to these words right now

Thanks Sue, this was great!

PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

13 posted 2004-02-03 07:04 PM

Great poem enjoyed a lot hope to read some more.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

14 posted 2004-02-03 11:26 PM

Beautiful Sue! As always.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

15 posted 2004-02-06 12:42 PM

Sue: Your romantic poems always carry me away to the scene you are describing!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

16 posted 2004-02-06 01:09 AM

this is a very touching, beautiful poem
~very bittersweet romantic~

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

17 posted 2004-02-06 07:43 AM

I hope one day you'll return
And never feel the need to roam
Because I've waited for so long
For you to call my heart your home
lovely words ,romantic,hopeful.

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