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Ratleader

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0 posted 2004-02-02 05:15 PM

The clouds shine like gods;
"Come down, share with us," we cry.
Yet when they do: fog....

Ratleader

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1 posted 2004-02-02 05:16 PM

This inspired by a reply of icebox' to something of mine.... Should have posted it separately, 'box -- 'twas good enough!

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Martie

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2 posted 2004-02-02 05:53 PM

Ed...Indeed! I liked this! It's supposed to rain alot...I've been waiting.

Magnus

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3 posted 2004-02-02 05:58 PM

Ok, where is the rainex, fogex and Fedex?

Seriously, a good point made herein...

McLean
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since 2004-01-05

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state of marital bliss

4 posted 2004-02-02 07:46 PM

fog....

like, confusion? Or, like, blindness?

Maybe both. Yes, both, I think!

Excellent write!

McLean

Grover
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5 posted 2004-02-02 07:49 PM

So true! Grover.

Sadelite
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6 posted 2004-02-02 09:15 PM

RatL.,
The gods must have the fog working in full blast over here! Some mornings, the roads, hardly visible! Enjoyed your write, as always.
~Sadelite~

steavenr
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7 posted 2004-02-02 09:42 PM

this is so cool...and so true on many levels...excellent

Mistletoe Angel

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8 posted 2004-02-02 10:43 PM

(smiles) But with the dew comes moisture, and moisture brings dew to the earth, and there we know that the gods are listening, yay, God Bless You, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
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9 posted 2004-02-03 12:23 PM

can't help it, rotflmao!

Michelle_loves_Mike

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10 posted 2004-02-03 02:59 AM

awsum,,,,,and more true than we'd like to think
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-02-03 04:41 AM

can't say anything because my mouth just fell open

stunning piece!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

12 posted 2004-02-03 11:10 AM

Nay...misty surreal
where cool dew-kiss clings briefly
that a dream wanders...

~*~

Heh.

You inspired me!

Paula Finn
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missouri

13 posted 2004-02-03 01:05 PM

On tiny cat feet
Soft as a lovers first kiss
Morning after mind

Nicely done

suthern

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Louisiana

14 posted 2004-02-03 01:55 PM

And I suddenly see the correlation of clouds, gods... and bosses. *G*

This is wonderful, my friend... No one can match your ability to encompasse so many levels in so few words... I've read this and smiled... read it and mourned... will read it again and again and admire. *S*

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