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thinktwice
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since 2003-12-23
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0 posted 2004-02-02 05:02 PM



I think i'll wait
For it all to work out
After it's come apart
Once it's back together
I think i'll stay
For the rain to break
After the clouds breathe
Once the calm speaks

Listen to the sound
So easy to overlook
In the bustle of a day
The simplicity becomes you

In quiet times
When all finally sleeps
From these moments
I find such peace
Amazement slowly grows
In the wonder of stillness
At night amoungst the stars
All is sound, all is right

With quiet eyes
and ready ears
A wind moves in mystery
Humming through the trees
Everything is said
Though no words spoken
Serenity witnessed
All is sound, all is right

© Copyright 2004 Adam Wolf - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-02-02 06:14 PM


An exceptional poem. Very well written! Grover.
Kie
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 77
USA
2 posted 2004-02-02 06:58 PM


Peaceful, serene, gentle, soft. So many words come to mind to describe your poem. I loved the flow and overall feel of this write. Well done. Kie
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-02-03 05:12 AM


gosh! this is gorgeous!
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